That was really harrowing, what a great work.
That being said the ending feels... off, to an extent. That's one hell of a fast rebound and I'm not sure of what the author is trying to convey/not sure if I like what I think they're trying to convey.
I don't mean the moving out part or her being in a relationship with someone already, that part I understand, it's the happy to crying to fine just a bit after that puzzles me.
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