To be honest, this is one of the few "Hentai" deries i have read where the comedy is actually working! :) Normally when writers tries to put comedy in, it often ends-up being more awkward then funny, and other writers just skip all comedy and then we end up with stuff like "bible black".
So basicly, i love this Doujini! It has a really good balance between the story and the...erotic parts..so to speak. I simply dont feel like a "complete" pervert when reading this...just a little.

10/10 stars! :D