http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/a_love_smeared_in_ashes

Bumping this two shot. (Link is to the first part.)

continuity problems! half the time Towada had ponytails instead of a braid! Against school rules!

woof

I think it's on comick, but thanks for the extra option!

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Ah, I'd missed that. (Peril of phone reading?) Thanks.

Are pages 186-188 supposed to be a flashback to before the series started? Seemed a weird transition.

Whoops, it's easily found on google tho i just suck at googling so it took me a while, here it is: https://stellarrealm.net/series/please-bully-me-miss-villainess

This is MTL, right? Uncredited translator, massive amount of chapters, "premium" points for latest chapters...

ah! thanks.

Uhhh so Evie, we just gonna gloss over that part, or am I a dumbass who forgot something that makes this line a nothing burger?

The previous chapter talked about whether Evie's bad ends are inevitable. She is the designated 'villainess' after all. Plus that "infinite monster attack" scene that she time-looped to prevent.

I still have yet to read the extras. I really gotta check them sometime.

Comments keep referring to "extras" but what is there besides the bonus chapter at the end?

Help. Why is the artist girl called Misumi, Kasumi, and Sumita? I'm thinking her name is Misumi Kasumi (Japanese order) and Sumita is somehow a nickname... Used by both her classmates and her teacher?

I tried translating the webnovel if anyone is interested: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Fu3QAibYpu4Q8Asunlo4gD5KktaGo4xA?usp=sharing

Are you working at a crazy pace or using MTL?

if it turns out the boy is also cheating on our MC

That would require the boy to show up again after the first chapter.

Even I know that breaking up via text is considered the absolute worst.

But is it worse than formally cheating because you haven't broken up yet?

the passed on loved one

...oh! that's what was on page 2, shrine and photo.

I was thinking Remu, Azuki, Meguru, Niji. But I'm not equipped to argue about the middle two.

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if they're 'still together' then what was the friend intervention mentioned earlier

I, too, started getting siscon vibes.

So will Yuuka be the innocent target of contention or have a surprise of her own...

Yeah. I wasn't saying her fetish is normal, but the doll-licker is the most psychologically well-adjusted of the bunch.

I dunno, maybe that's unfair to Meguru.

4 girls

relatively normal fetishist
needs therapy
needs more therapy
needs a restraining order

Thank you!

^ are you seriously doing the "she just hasn't met the right guy" routine? Here of all places?

Doing that to someone who says she's a lesbian is very bad. But that's not what we have here. We have a teen girl trying to figure herself out. And I didn't say she just hasn't met the right guy, I only said it was a logical possibility, vs the comments saying "well she has to be gay or ace".

And this is a series where het exists (see chapter 1).

Oh right, I think Dubcon has also been applied to some oneshots where we just don't know the context of what's going on. Not obviously consensual BDSM, somehow doesn't feel like rape, so gets Dubcon though maybe 'Unknown consent' would be more precise.

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/their_secret_time is a good example, especially looking at the comments. Lots of uncertainty about what's going on.

rents fake girlfriends to go on dates with him, which is a real service in japan

Real service elsewhere, too, though maybe harder to find in the currently puritan US.

For that matter, Kuritani could be a raging het, but not have found anyone male who turns her on, yet.

(Not saying that's likely in the story, given the author and rest of the story, but in reality would be quiet likely.)