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Wow the colours in this ae really good.

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Ahh one of my favourites has been featured. It's so refreshing to read this again. I don't really understand people who say it's rushed. The story clearly pans out for a couple of months.

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Hello I want more. Give me more delinquent stories pls

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It was too one-note to really work for long. A gullible girl, a one-track obsessor, and a contrarian with a guest sadist isn't really a stellar cast to do interesting things with.

Sounds like a good cast to play around with for me.

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This is deffo something that needs to be spread out into a multi-chapter work. There's so much potential with the characters and I agree, this looks like a pitch for a series.

I really like the premise. There needs to be more college/adult yuri. I really love the art too. It's messy but cute, and kinda reflective of both characters.

Also I can just imagine this:
Me: does literally anything
Narrator: Dumbass ^

Edit: Also art girl giving random gifts reminds me of a cat.

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Sometimes I wish these improbable things would happen to me

Children are sexually curious beings, just like teens and adults. But unlike them, children don’t suppress their desires. This happening to you isn’t improbable, there’s a chance it might :p

Umm... does the forum have a way to report actual pedophiles? Second poster crossed a line here.

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Yandere lolis. Now this I can get into. Also those casual canines on the servant. Woof.

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The classic bait and switch. Honestly called it the moment I saw Love Triangle.

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I love the yandere genre but there was just something off about this. I can't really put my finger on it tho

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Marie: I love you Mel.
Everyone: pretends to be shocked

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Things you don't say to your girlfriend: "It's so good being in a romance where I'm not the one who feels jealous and lonely." xD

This. Got to that part and I basically just put down my phone and walked away. Thank gods that was the end.

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First Time discussion 20 Nov 04:29
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People here thinking that first time sex is always perfect from the get go. Geez. This was actually a good depiction of how awkward it can be and how you help each other in any way you can, such as by going with their reactions. The characters were really well... in character, and I liked how this went. Art was really good too.

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sees the discourse
looks at the update
Umm... I like the driver I think she's cute?

Edit: On a more serious note, Stella is actually doing the right thing. All the evidence she has to go by is a beastkin that clearly ran away and her own beastkin urging her not to let master see Mel. Maybe she doesn't have the full story yet, but keeping them apart for now would be the right course of action in case of abuse. It's just common sense.

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Age Gap?

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IT'S AN ACTUAL THING NOW IM SO HAPPY

Edit: Really like the fact that her first reason is superficial. Like yeah that's a bit more realistic than some of the other romances here.

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I dont know what to say. This is just sloppy writing. I can't even believe it. It's like the author had a fever dream and decided to make it into a manga. I liked the premise. It was interesting if factually inaccurate, but this spiralled way, way out of control (and not in a good way).

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Ahhh i always love monster yuri

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This new development is rubbing me the wrong way... but I'm most miffed about the fact that we have this new couple instead of an update on one of the best teacher student pairs xD Gimme my girls back

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Woah that was intense. More so than it needed to be. Anyway I'm still super interested even if it's a warped version of what we understand as DID. Always up for yandere characters and this is a nice little concept.

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Meh. Like the others have said, this would have had more impact if it was longer. Meh. At least this made me want to reread A World Without Freedom.

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Image Comments 20 Oct 21:08
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So much KanColle love here but I dont think I've seen some for AL

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I love frindtts. Would like to have one some day.

But on a more serious note, I still ship the frindtt and the sensei, so i'm hoping Tsu's happy ending comes from the hooded friend or a hot new girl who hopefully isn't in love with her sister.

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Now we just need Tsu to be happy. Please let her be happy. Please. :(

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This is Food Fantasy but even gayer

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Image Comments 30 Sep 02:01
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^it's because the gays are taking over the bowsette trend