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BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 15:11
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
P4cpj2p

^But we can never know who is the tachi or the neko in this relationship (don't use yaoi terms, c'mon, this is a professional yuri site)

last edited at Jun 4, 2019 3:11PM

BugDevil
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Ren-kyun has a strict bugs-only policy. Gotta respect that.

...Bug-sexual?

What a devilish idea.

BugDevil
improving writing 04 Jun 11:26
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

@Serenata is absolutely right. That's probably actually the most important thing of all... You need to know how your story ends and what the point of the entire tale is. The core idea/theme. You can write the best beginning of all time, but if you don't know where to go, it will all end up being hot air.

Take it from someone who generally wings most of the plot, it's definitely important to at least have the framwork figured out. Most writers I know work from plot point to plot point and the inbetween is either improvised or not as important.

last edited at Jun 4, 2019 11:27AM

BugDevil
improving writing 04 Jun 11:12
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Rather than poetry, it's probably enough to look at lyrics in general. Song texts (good ones mind you) can be really creative and just as good as poetry. Except, ya know, less pretentious.

last edited at Jun 4, 2019 11:13AM

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 11:02
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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^I know, but she does have the horns of a ram.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 10:59
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
Tifaerith

^Guess I was just unlucky. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

BugDevil
improving writing 04 Jun 10:46
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Also, don't only read stuff that's in your preferred genre. Read all kinds of stuff.

Probably the best advice. I'd also add if you really want to write well, read poetry, no exceptions.

Now that's elitist talk.

BugDevil
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Has there been a manga where a rich girl eats a McDonald's hamburger for the first time and says, "Wow! This is awful"?

Better yet, why not eat at different fast foods. Go to KFC or Chik fil A or even Taco Bell. It's like only Mcdonalds, family restaurants, and cafes are the only existing places to eat in manga

That's probably because half of those chains don't exist in Japan...

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 07:17
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
Shorthair

^Will Ryuko also tag along for that date?

BugDevil
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Ren-kyun has a strict bugs-only policy. Gotta respect that.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 05:19
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
K_22_kyo_1118520500282466305

What else did she expect?

BugDevil
improving writing 04 Jun 02:52
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

Read a lot and write a lot. Practice is everything, just like with anything else. Sure, there are general guides that help, but I personally think it won't work out unless you keep trying and get feedback.

If we go really basic, try to enrich your vocabulary (reading helps with that) and try only to write about things you really care about at first. Writing half-heartedly will only lead to scrapped works for a beginner.
Oh and perhaps try to write some shorter stories first. The really long ones tend to crumble away if you aren't fully committed.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:42
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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So this implies the flowers grow depending on how embarrassed she gets lol

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:37
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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I have no doubt these "workout" videos would be televised all around the Roman capital on SE.RA.PH.
And in retaliation Tamamo makes a whole other kind of "instructional" video with Hakunon for the Cherryblossom Capital and things only escalate from there...

last edited at Jun 4, 2019 2:38AM

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:36
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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Not a fan of OCs. Negom could be using this amazing art better.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:34
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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^The fact that they are a canon pairing. In the games anyway. Don't watch the anime where they forced in a male MC.
Also Tamamo is a better wife. As is Archer tbh.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:33
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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She is such an 8.... outta 10.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:32
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
Tifaerith

What triangle? My Cloud only ever went on dates with Barret.
Tifa and Aerith were busy for some reason~

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:31
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
Shorthair

Nonon certainly deserves some happiness. Maybe some art will resurface once the game comes out.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:30
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
D8krr2oueaaucgu-orig

Ucchi's emoji eyes are superhuman, huh? Seeing something on a passing train in such detail is crazy.
Which fits, because Ucchi is crazy.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:28
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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Sometimes it's easy to forget how chill these two can be.

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:27
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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"Nanoha, that's your diagnosis."

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:27
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
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Jiiiiiiiiii

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:26
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
Mizuumi

Guess this is after they grew up a little (not enough in Moon's case tho lol)

BugDevil
Image Comments 04 Jun 02:25
Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018
D7u1labueaaofnc-orig

Did Tendou Maya always have such broad shoulders?