"Lana, a college student and ex-magical girl, has spent the last four years trying to forget about her fantastical past. A call from her old partner, Jory, forces her back into action, and with it come old wounds and grievances. Will they be able to put aside their differences for long enough to survive one last fight, or will they destroy themselves in the end?"
"Features 4 different endings. May release an updated version later."
This is a new raw of Les Chuu Life, this appears to be an expanded second edition of the tank for the first three chapters, but there are new scenes at the end of chapters 2 and 3 that are definitely worth a look.
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As it will probably take forever before Kawaii has time for this extra, I did a little cleaning and copie/pasted your translation in. Maybe you or someone else who can read Chinese can check.
I haven't read them yet, are the errors that bad? If so are they grammatical errors or translation errors? Because I can only clean/typeset not translate.
I noticed a couple of grammatical errors from previous translations, also the flow of the translation sounds kind of weird in some places but nothing serious. I would say it is an average translation.
Oh I was going to edit the NanoFate ones(from here) myself but it was late that day and then got distracted with other things, I didn't know they were done already haha thanks for the links I was going to waste my time >_<
you should just do them, would be a shame to not have those done by someone more sane, plus I noticed some errors in the translation that need better work.
