Thats a good job if you can get it.

But did that other woman have a go pro on top of her head or something to get those shots lol

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I don't think anything will ever top "May I Ask For One Final Thing?" for me when it comes to this particular story opening trope. So damn satisfying.

That the one where the villainess beats the shit out of a room full of nobles?

Lol- whats that from?

lol

I think this deserves some extra tags

Im sure it will get them. On DS they often leave off spoilery tags for a bit on a new story as long as its not something really bad that might trigger people.

Talk about a totally moronic thing to say lol.
I've a feeling even if she had tried she couldnt have pulled off a bluff for long given how stupid she seems!

Huh, that was the worst cross dressing ever. I mean, anyway, I love this villainess stuff, when it's yuri, so yay!!!

Lol- i agree. How is she fooling anyone like that? Especially with the long hair. She looks exactly like a woman dressed up in a prince's outfit.

@Random_Bird Fair enough - it was the first time i've seen it - but I bet its the first time it was done with the jilted woman going on the yuri route :) - rather than to some Ikemen harem.

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^That is Marisa's given size. Its not official but fans worked out their sizes and that is what is accepted. And its clear Marisa is small. ps not much point comparing her to someone else most people wont know the height of lol.

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I think this is the fourth or fifth series I've read with this start... looks good tho

Same lol- since magical revolution did it ive seen at least 2-3 others start with almost the same set up! - I think it was the first to do it?

But I also agree it looks good enough that im interested to see more.

^ Because she is lol. Maybe not that small but she is pretty small - four foot 9 (150cm).

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Nice chapter :) I wish we'd get some more Real developments tho.

p.s Is chapter 105 meant to be included with the 99.5 extras stuff for some reason?

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@Junior1210 Yeah I felt sorry for both of them - they woulda been good for each other too! All Koarin got was her fantasies and a creepy teacher stalking her (kinda) .. at least Sakaki got her cat in the end.. but id of much rather have seen them grow close.

How to effectively balance studying together and making out - its a nice problem to have lol.

I knew it would end soon once they got together :( Still, its been a great ride- and its a lot better than them never getting together or having a proper ending because the author tried to spin it out forever.

I dont mind a new chr to give them a nudge in the right direction or cause a bit of jelousy etc but PLEASE lets avoid any pointy polygons in this story!

This would be a lot hotter if you reversed their positions imo.

Also - @Kojiro481 I agree :) I hope they push it a bit further in the next part too!

Anyone know if the physical will get an english release?

^Not sure what constitutes disasters but they are couples and do the normal couply stuff lol even if it took a while for Anis and Euphie.

Poor Tilty - better luck in book 5, girl!

lovely pic :)

I know this isn't the first and not the last story to do it, but does this happen? Do people just get up to other people and grab them? And if so how often does that happen? I know I know, it was done to save time and jump right into the issue of this guy being a nuisance. But at that point just cut to Maki going back with drinks and show Julia in the distance looking distressed with a guy or two around her. I think social anxiety is common enough nowadays that it would be even more relatable to the viewers, really.

I had a moment of being unable to suspend my disbelief at it more in this story than usual because of where they were in this particular story too. A place where money is being won, and people start getting aggressive and grabbing random women? Security would have them out instantly.

And this is a great oneshot as a professional debut. Hope to see more of their work in the future.

Well to be fair you cant win money in a pachinko parlor- all the stuff in the machines is tokens so the only money is with the coin exchange counter/machine. I think pachinko parlours are pretty low maintenance/low staff.

But still - the tokens are not worth nothing- There'd be a shop across the stree that could exchange the prizes they buy for cash.

Did they just leave shit loads of tokens behind?

So are these really all adults who are tiny and look like kids, like Koguma?
I mean i cant see how otherwise a group of children that young could be running a cafe?

^Lol this is true- and while it has tons of kissing, i cant recall offhand any that last more than say 2-3 pannels or seem to span more than a few minutes. There probably are and im forgetting - time i re-read it :)

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Every so often I just think to myself "three hours" and smile.

Me too :)

I mean how often do we get extensive or multiple kiss scenes or are told they made out of hours?
We normally get kiss scenes of a single kiss - and then sex scenes. In fact the only other example I can think of with multi panel/page kissing or making out that lasted hours I can think of is in Choir - and maybe a few doujins.

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