I've been watching this series lately

It's been really good so far =w=

Oooooh we got a LOVE TRIANGLE FORMIN'

Something about the writing of this series is making it kinda hard for me to follow, but I dunno if I can put my finger on why

They kinda just don't talk like... real people, and it's kinda hard to follow their emotions and reasonings. I dunno if it's just me though

Ah I sure do love a ridiculous coincidence, loads of fun

This is a VERY manga chapter. We have to let our suspension of disbelief slip. but even then this is frustrating as hell lol

This might be all we get of these characters but it's still Nagori Yu, which means it's great

Also they AREN'T the same characters. The big powerful woman is a tsundere this time. That's new!

And hey, she finished Yuki and the Authoress, possibly the best manga on this entire site, so she can futz around and make two chapters of whatever she wants for the rest of her life for all I care.

You sleep in the same bed, she swore she'd change her life to support you and only you, and you've kissed

It's way too late to be having this conversation, you useless lesbian.

So much complaining in the comments again kekw. Not like any of you can do better.

Ah the good old argument "you can't do better". Yes i can't do better but does it matter ? If you couldn't criticized something if you couldn't do better, then there will near to none criticism.

Also at least in terms of writing I think the average person on here could piece together a more cohesive and less shock-value filled short story.

Also I'm literally an author, I CAN do better, do I get permission to critique the story now?

okay but wtf is sea-lioning

I mean you really could just google it but I'll give you a few links

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sealioning: Here's the wikipedia page for it

http://wondermark.com/1k62/: Here's a link to the webcomic where the term got its source

They're back with another wall that includes accusations against the mods that I believe need to be addressed directly.

Please someone do something about this person. I am really tired of the countless sea-lioning mile long treatises where it's just bigoted dogwhistle after bigoted dogwhistle. "We all have a right to our own spaces" my foot.

Prolly needs a rape tag, put in a request for it.

I usually don't read the depressing as fuck stories, dunno why I felt compelled to read this. A lot of the time it feels more shock-factor than anything. But hey, glad people can enjoy it.

Last chapter it was like, just starting to become sundown. This chapter, the sun was completely down. Were they making out for like 30 minutes?

makes out with a girl for 30 minutes "I dunno, did she like it? I can't be sure ):"

Oooh we got ALL of 'em this time! Senpai barely counts but she was there lmao

"their feelings pass each other straight by!"

Oh, I dunno if I'd say STRAIGHT by, narrator

To be fair "their feelings pass each other lesbian by!" Doesn't work as well.

No no you're missing some commas, it's "Their feelings pass each other, lesbian, bi!"

"their feelings pass each other straight by!"

Oh, I dunno if I'd say STRAIGHT by, narrator

was afraid to cause a long discussion tbh. I hate them. I just wanted to say how the lines like pg104 "I am not a boy, I dont have a dick" and "only because we are both girls, I understand it" pg118, really struck a nerve.

I would also like to not derail it too much. It also kinda feels like a bad faith argument here.

It's a legitimate reason to feel uncomfortable and negative about it. You should be allowed to acknowledge you're uncomfortable by cisnormative writing without people jumpin' down your throat.

I didn't notice it myself while reading it, myself, but now that you mention it I do see whatcha mean too.

Its not about who, but rather HOW does a sock randomly appear in the kitchen?! For all I know, socks do not just slip from your feet...

I actually leave socks all over the place. I'm wearing socks, then my feet get hot and they become uncomfy, I take them off absent mindedly as I'm like, working on something else. I genuinely don't notice it

Then I see it on the floor next to my desk later on and I'm like "god dammit not again"

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LET'S FUCKIN' rips open shirt GOOOOOOOO

Wow this is moving really really fast lol, did it get cancelled already???

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I was worried the introduction of this new character would lead to a love triangle and jealousy arc, but thankfully no she's just their child instead.

I'll go ahead and repost my idea, both in case it got lost, and for ease of access for me, because I often go back to it to edit it and put down examples so that if it's ever added we can easily put tags onto the right things.

My suggestion for a tag is the foreigner tag! The defintion could be something like Fakku's definition, which is: "Character in a foreign country. Common example being the exchange student trope. Note that the tag is not "non-Japanese," meaning it's not applicable if a chapter is set in (for example) America with everyone being American". It also says Isekais don't count, which I agree, but fictional worlds with foreign countries should absolutely count.

Most language gap stories would fit in this tag, but not all foreigner stories would be language gap stories. I know "what is the difference between this and language gap" was a question last time. There are a lot of foreign exchange students who join school in stories who are fluent in Japanese, so that tag wouldn't come up.

The following are all the examples I've found so far in my attempts to read basically everything on this site.

"Sentimental Beach Side"

"F.U.S.S.A."

"The Foreigner and the Insensitive Tomboy"

"Mismatch Girls"

"the_sheep_princess_in_wolfs_clothing" maybe, if we don't want to add the "fictional nations don't count" rule, because it's about someone working in a foreign country to them.

"Beloved Painting Ch. 7"

"Elena" maybe??? I dunno it's hard for me to follow this one but the Elena at the end is probably not Japanese.

"Yuri Manga for Studying Japanese"

"Girls of Sun and Sea" and its sequel, "Midsummer Lovers"

"Summer Vacation"

"A San Fransisco Story"

"Christmas Eve Agape"

"Cirque Arachne"

"The Sea, You, and the Sun"

"Butterfly 69" and its sequels - This one doesn't really say it anywhere in the text, but Maria Steinhardt is not the most Japanese name I've ever heard of, so it's probable.

"Vacation Maou to Pet" - The Demon King is probably not native to Japan. Might not count under the "Isekai rules" but it's not really... an Isekai? So it might count.

"My Food Seems To Be Very Cute" - Maria is a foreigner.

"Game"

All chapters tagged Elisha x Honoka.

"SHY"

"VAMPEERZ" prolly fits as well

"Yurikon Ch8"

There's definitely more, if anyone else has good suggestions, let me know! I love the language barrier tag a lot, but it's not all encompassing for stories like that =w=

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First page: "There are some yuri elements in this"

the comic: literally depicts two women having sex

Yeah I mean I guess you're not wrong

Not any of these, though After School is one of my absolute favorites. Thanks for tryin', friends!

could it be this oneshot called "their secret time" by hanano chiaki?

This... MIGHT be it!! I remember it being a little different from this, but my memory is terrible lmao it could very well be this.

Not any of these, though After School is one of my absolute favorites. Thanks for tryin', friends!

Reminds me of that facebook comment that was like "I am now announcing that Samantha and I are no longer dating", followed by a comment of "Honey thats the WORST way to announce that we got married"