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Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

My theory is this will end up with Tae going to Mai's house to check up on her and meeting her family. Maybe it'll end up sweet and cute, but it might also make MORE DRAMA which has to be cleared up in the fourth volume, prolly involving getting Mai's parents to go "Yes sure let's allow an obvious lolicon around our child"

Well I got some of it right! Not exactly how I envisioned it!

Mai's mom doesn't seem very happy to see her though, so I suspect lots of drama on our horizon.

This raises a very important question: will Shino be into Mai's mother?

Rule of funny says yes.

last edited at Jan 8, 2023 10:49AM

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Oh? They met before, made a childhood promise, and kissed? Has this been eluded to before, does anyone remember?

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Oh no, drama!

My theory is this will end up with Tae going to Mae's house to check up on her and meeting her family. Maybe it'll end up sweet and cute, but it might also make MORE DRAMA which has to be cleared up in the fourth volume, prolly involving getting Mae's parents to go "Yes sure let's allow an obvious lolicon around our child"

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Oooh, usin' the big L word already, movin' fast, aren't we lesbians?

What's next, the u-haul?

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

I don't think Yuki's actually in love with Tae in a romantic way (and am completely prepared to be proven wrong later). She's desperate for a loving Onee-sama and Tae just so happens to be her Onee-sama of choice.
Mai's flirting still feels so much more deliberate and directed.

I agree with Yuki, but I don't actually think I agree with Mai. I think she IS in love but y'know, doesn't get it. It's not deliberate or directed, she's just naturally flirty like that. I just get that vibe from some scenes, like that one with them together on the trip.

Lizstar
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

holds up empty cup More please.

Lizstar
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Kyouko is 100% in the right here and Ritsu should not have yelled at her lol

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Yeeaaah! I'm glad this is continuing! This series is super cute and wholesome in a not at all wholesome way. It works real well, and these characters are super charming.

Lizstar
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

I've been watching this series lately

It's been really good so far =w=

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Oooooh we got a LOVE TRIANGLE FORMIN'

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Something about the writing of this series is making it kinda hard for me to follow, but I dunno if I can put my finger on why

They kinda just don't talk like... real people, and it's kinda hard to follow their emotions and reasonings. I dunno if it's just me though

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Ah I sure do love a ridiculous coincidence, loads of fun

Lizstar
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

This is a VERY manga chapter. We have to let our suspension of disbelief slip. but even then this is frustrating as hell lol

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

This might be all we get of these characters but it's still Nagori Yu, which means it's great

Also they AREN'T the same characters. The big powerful woman is a tsundere this time. That's new!

And hey, she finished Yuki and the Authoress, possibly the best manga on this entire site, so she can futz around and make two chapters of whatever she wants for the rest of her life for all I care.

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

You sleep in the same bed, she swore she'd change her life to support you and only you, and you've kissed

It's way too late to be having this conversation, you useless lesbian.

Lizstar
Cross Fire discussion 27 Dec 15:19
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

So much complaining in the comments again kekw. Not like any of you can do better.

Ah the good old argument "you can't do better". Yes i can't do better but does it matter ? If you couldn't criticized something if you couldn't do better, then there will near to none criticism.

Also at least in terms of writing I think the average person on here could piece together a more cohesive and less shock-value filled short story.

Also I'm literally an author, I CAN do better, do I get permission to critique the story now?

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

okay but wtf is sea-lioning

I mean you really could just google it but I'll give you a few links

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sealioning: Here's the wikipedia page for it

http://wondermark.com/1k62/: Here's a link to the webcomic where the term got its source

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

They're back with another wall that includes accusations against the mods that I believe need to be addressed directly.

Please someone do something about this person. I am really tired of the countless sea-lioning mile long treatises where it's just bigoted dogwhistle after bigoted dogwhistle. "We all have a right to our own spaces" my foot.

Lizstar
Cross Fire discussion 27 Dec 11:31
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Prolly needs a rape tag, put in a request for it.

I usually don't read the depressing as fuck stories, dunno why I felt compelled to read this. A lot of the time it feels more shock-factor than anything. But hey, glad people can enjoy it.

Lizstar
Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Last chapter it was like, just starting to become sundown. This chapter, the sun was completely down. Were they making out for like 30 minutes?

makes out with a girl for 30 minutes "I dunno, did she like it? I can't be sure ):"

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Oooh we got ALL of 'em this time! Senpai barely counts but she was there lmao

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

"their feelings pass each other straight by!"

Oh, I dunno if I'd say STRAIGHT by, narrator

To be fair "their feelings pass each other lesbian by!" Doesn't work as well.

No no you're missing some commas, it's "Their feelings pass each other, lesbian, bi!"

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

"their feelings pass each other straight by!"

Oh, I dunno if I'd say STRAIGHT by, narrator

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

was afraid to cause a long discussion tbh. I hate them. I just wanted to say how the lines like pg104 "I am not a boy, I dont have a dick" and "only because we are both girls, I understand it" pg118, really struck a nerve.

I would also like to not derail it too much. It also kinda feels like a bad faith argument here.

It's a legitimate reason to feel uncomfortable and negative about it. You should be allowed to acknowledge you're uncomfortable by cisnormative writing without people jumpin' down your throat.

I didn't notice it myself while reading it, myself, but now that you mention it I do see whatcha mean too.

Gay%20panic
joined Sep 11, 2020

Its not about who, but rather HOW does a sock randomly appear in the kitchen?! For all I know, socks do not just slip from your feet...

I actually leave socks all over the place. I'm wearing socks, then my feet get hot and they become uncomfy, I take them off absent mindedly as I'm like, working on something else. I genuinely don't notice it

Then I see it on the floor next to my desk later on and I'm like "god dammit not again"

last edited at Dec 12, 2022 2:13AM