As a writer myself, I brainstormed just now and came up with about 10+ other ways their childhood friendship could’ve been introduced that would’ve actually helped the pair synthesize more, as opposed to just giving us poorly written randomness
Show, don't tell.
What a cheerful story. Hold on to a GF that gets you lucrative coupons for sweets!
A very existential chapter. I never understand this "couple." The one girl makes stoic seem positively ebullient, revelling in detachment.
Stairs are kryptonite to school girls.
Profaning each other at the shrine: hardcore.
The white-haired gal looks so much like Konata. Ha! Now she needs a Kagamin.
Their poor wingwoman is bingo ammo, but can't make a dent. Her exacerbation is palpable.
The way that Eisa concert was drawn made me immediately "hear" them and want to dance.
Can really be true? A return to the fun and allure of the early chapters....
Starring a young Rumia.
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Good grief, are they cute sharing a bun.
Her battle underwear was amazing.
The infirmary never lets us down as a catalyst for yuri.
Very unrewarding story. Her obvious reticence at the end was a pail of cold water.
That was cyclic rate yuri. Need more of that.
She'll understand fine when she gets caved.
Her dress is amazing.
Uh oh. A flag went up....
I hate seeing the little peanuts in distress.
"I was eavesdropping." Big respect for instant honesty.
Awww. Fewer fluids than normal, however.
Rubinesque.
And all is right with the world.
You must be my lucky star, 'cause you shine on me wherever you are.
Fukami, my heart goes with you. You and Kase would make a smashing-good couple.
