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There was also the option to make some loud noise with the many boxes in there to make the girl aware that someone was in the closet, then walk out and pretend he didn't see them being there. :p

Or even call out to them when they started talking to make sure they knew he was around doing something and would leave them alone in just a minute.

Many possibilities other than "let's stay hidden all night in there and risk a misunderstanding if I try to sneak out in the middle of the night and end up waking them up." ^^;

But you just shifted the blame from the dad to Tamamusi without addressing the original point. It was originally said that the dad is a bad character for spying on his daughter's having sex, but now Tamamusi was a bad writer when she used the misunderstanding trope. It's okay if you don't find that type of humor funny, but address it properly without relying on misrepresenting character motivations.

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I found the dad creepy. He was gonna watch them have sex and his excuse for it is "I gotta know if my daughter's a top so I can give her yuri books to help." Wtf man, get your priorities straight

But you're wrong.

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sup with page 9 here

That's what it was like in the Japanese source.

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Hijiri Byakuren. She's strong and dedicated to her goals. I also find it cute that no matter how kind and well-meaning her actions to bring Buddhism to the youkai are, it's clear she's never really thought the entire thing through.

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Fisting?

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Alien Girl discussion 01 Feb 19:21
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I always figured she might be a hybrid like that movie Species. I'd also pose that that there's evidence of reciprocation of affection from the alien, but I'm not sure I get the feeling its the same that we see from the good doctor...

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Eh, switching it up on occasion is its own kind of fun.

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Touhou Newbie 27 Jan 14:41
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From my experience, starting to get into Touhou is pretty intimidating because of all the characters you have to learn. Though this makes it hard to get into, I think that ends up being its greatest benefit as well. Once you learn the characters and setting, stories can pretty much circumvent world building. You can have complex character dynamics and settings without having to set that up in the doujin — which would have been hard to do if you're trying to keep page count relatively low — and a side benefit of (for the most part) avoiding having the same schoolgirl setting.

My suggestion is to learn the two main characters, Reimu and Marisa, then briefly introduce yourself to a few of the more popular couples. Find a couple or two that you like, then start reading. Eventually, you'll pretty much be forced to learn about other characters, and your roster of known characters will slowly increase. Something helpful can be looking up characters on the Touhou wiki when you see them the first few times: http://en.touhouwiki.net

I will break from those before me and say you might want to consider not starting with the official works. If you're in it for the yuri, then you'll be reading a lot of material without much immediate payoff — they're good reads, but you run the risk of it turning into a chore. From my personal experience, I started with the yuri, and as I became attached to certain couples, my interest in those characters grew alongside it, and I began branching out into more pairings, then non-yuri, and then official works — eventually started playing the games. You can certainly start with the official stuff, but if it starts feeling like a slog, I'd suggest learning Touhou from the fanon side rather than canon side.

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So much onomatopoeia. I just imagine the scanlators looking through the doujin, making the Picard Facepalm, and thinking "MANGA Y R U LIEK DIS?"

Not too far off, actually. I will say, however, that I find you get more out of the way they're written rather than what the utterance is, so in many cases, I'd rather keep a hastily scribbled or large jagged character than try to find a font that accurately represents what I just replaced.

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I've already done some basic cleaning over on Yuri Project, and I'm pretty much waiting for someone to tell me what font was being used before I finish chapter 7 http://safe.yuriproject.net/res/14669.html#i20236

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Rendezvous discussion 09 Dec 13:31
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It kind of makes sense, actually. Look at how many authors separate "yuri" from "lesbian", there seems to be an assumption that "yuri" doesn't only imply girl-girl romance, but something really idealized.

It's a good thing we have white people poking about so they can tell the Japanese how to properly use their language.

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I want lolis,not Toriko...

Why not both?

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what game anya play is?

Ironically, Love Live.

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It's Autumn discussion 15 Nov 09:11
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one of my favorite author. Maybe one day his original doujins would get translated

Her. And already begun.

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The artist commentary: 百合SEX画像です。ご参照下さい。

Translates roughly to: An image of yuri sex. Please use as a reference.

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What is this. I need series of it.

Each one was separately released, and I combined it into one thing. Currently there are 6, and if another 5 or 6 get released, I'll make another one.

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Page 2 Yurika reference?

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It doesn't so much end as stop.

I can hear the author putting down their pen an hour before it's due for printing, declaring "Done enough."

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FoF should have one, I supposed.
FoF

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Underground is where Hell used to be. Kisume simply didn't want to leave after the renovation.

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@Norainhere It says 'poke'.

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Thanks! Oh yeah, to get your image reviewed or to ask them questions just use the email on the submission form right?

Yes, yuritopia @ yrtp.info can be used for image review.

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Quick question! Would someone need to set a margin, or is that just a guide to make sure no one draws outside of it?

I'm trying to use paint net and I have no idea how to set one. I barely know how to use it overall ono, I'm planning on just drawing an image then retracing it on paint.net. Hopefully that part won't be hard with a drawing pad >.>"...

Also, this is probably a silly question, but is kissing, "all-age" content. lol All I can come up with right now is a drawing with a pair kissing or something.

I made a quick addendum to the original post addressing the margins. Basically, just draw/write inside the lines.

And yes, kissing is acceptable content in this. Just keep things relatively tame (though you might be able to slip in some hand holding if you're sneaky about it). You can also submit a draft of the image if you're unsure if it'll be accepted.

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Wait for the submission we upload the images online and send them a link right

Correct. Technically, the participation request can be submitted before you have the comic finished, but it's probably easiest to do it all at once if possible.

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MezaYuri are going to be hosting their last Kindred Spirits on the Roof event this year on November 6. Because it's the last event, they're putting together a fanbook to commemorate the past four years of yuritopia building. The bad news is that this event is held in Japan, meaning the first year that Kindred Spirits had large international appeal is also the last year of the fan event. The good news is that this fanbook is being opened to foreign submissions.

The submission form for having your work included in the book is in Japanese, but an official translation of the page has been released. Follow the steps, and you might get your work published in the fanbook; what's more, everyone who has their work accepted will be sent a print copy of the book.

I wish everyone luck in making this last hoorah as strong and memorable as possible.

Addendum: Here's a template for the dimensions of the submissions. You can put this as a background layer you can use as reference when drawing/writing. In addition, here's a guide for what margins are, why they're needed, and how they're being used here. For our purposes, treat everything inside the margins as the safe zone.

Addendum 2: If you're unsure if your idea is going to cross the line into NSFW, you can submit a draft and request they review it before putting the time in to complete it.

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