She completely ignored yae's threat and asked her 16 year old CHILD TO MARRY HER?! and then she bitched on about how 'we'll have our obstacles to overcome', like shut up and stop sugar coating the fact that you're a straight up pedo ugh

Dude if you read up until the end, where were you expecting the story to go?? Like the whole age gap premise was there from chapter one. Were you just reading this to see if Kusanagi gets arrested or something lmao? This series also has never shied away from all the repercussions of being with a minor and Kusanagi did reject Kazuki's advances for most of the series.

Like could she have waited until Kazuki was 18 to actually start being in a relationship? Yeah (and that STILL wouldn't be acceptable irl due to grooming), but we all knew what this story was gonna be about from the get go so no point in getting angry about the outcome lol.

how in hell it is grooming when the adult did everything in her power to dismiss her? how it is grooming when there was 0 grooming done on the young adult??? do you even know what geooming is? it’s the intention of an adult to groom/raise some one underage with the intention of taking advantage of them! POINT ME to the years of supposed grooming Kusanagi did!!!

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I don't really get all the people saying the new girl is nice. I have a little bit of sympathy for her situation, but it's pretty limited. I've never been that impressed by "Oh poor me I'm always number two"--do those people ever have any sympathy for the people further down? They do not, and she's no exception. Plus, the reason she wants to be number one is a smidge of hypercompetitiveness added to a bunch of need for adulation--she wants all the fans so she can bask in the attention and love, none of which she plans to return. She's a self-centred narcissist; how is that "nice'?

She isn't a character who IS NICE, she is a character who has NICE CHARACTER DESIGN--she LOOKS pretty and inoffensive, and she didn't ever QUITE look yandere when she said some of the creepier things she said. So, enough to be "nice" I guess?

'tis comedy and light hearted. Why doth thou want to overcriticize things that makes people happy?

because the character is an narcissistic asshole? if your gonna make it comedy from that, this ain’t comedy well written then, for me i wish she will fuck off and never return, cuz what they said about the character is true

that is all? is this the whole story???

ok so i did reread the one shot, it just looks like the change was happening too fast for Fuu-chan! and that is all from the looks of it 0.0 it does seamn to be an thing were that day Fuu-chan didn’t wanna be alone with her new lover? like i said it looks like the relationship was moving way to fast

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This is the most worthless story... nothing's happened this entire time and I have no reason to think the finale will change that. What a nothingburger of a manga.

HAHAH true, the story was just the teenager getting to figure out her life and that is all, the god damn yuri tag and the age gap tag should be god damn wipe from this manga, there was 0 relationship progression, there was 0 yuri in this story, unless you consider them becoming friends yuri and age gap??? like wtf was this story???

ah yeah, so it took some
time for this story to be posted here, and ofc the ending was an rushed one, but at least looking at the big picture! it got an happy ending :3 AND THEY WERE TOGETHER! proper GIREFRIENDS!!! like OMFG how much bad luck did i had last year with yuri mangas not having an clear proper YURI ENDING!

That was really cute confession...
Please finish Swallow Tail

ain’t like the story not translated? or did they catch up with the author and they stop updating the story? also can you please tell me were i can read the translated verion?

soooo that was cute………is it me or i kinda got tired of this types of yuri? were it’s soooooooooo implied that they like each in an “special way” i got used to it by now, but right now i’m starting to getting tired of how many full serialized yuri manga just don’t go anyway or the romance is sooo god damn week i wander way some of them even have the yuri tag

speaking of of the yuri tag, i might got the shityest luck with the amount of yuri mangas that were just bait! (one was even made specifically by the author to be bait)

Rant Over.

ok, so i waited to see the ending of this manga to decide if it’s worth reading it….. did they confess at chapter 10 then? cuz i don’t see an confession, just your stupid typical non romantic “supposed” “confessio”

“be by my side forever” that is such a shity cope out bro!!!

you know that in het stories, they MAKE SURE you know they confess to one another! way is Yuri doing this kind of thing?? way is Yuri or GL as an gener the one were they “imply” they will be together? at least this story from the comments has way more romantic progression, but other Yuri/GL stories really love their it’s “it is implied they MIGHT be together….you know in the distant future!!!”

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btw she died lmao

that was hilarious no cap, 0 build up lol oh you looking for jane? yeah she's dead bro :/

I seriously laughed out loud.

which makes the one shot kinda meh, not something to even remotely make me feel something

This is still cute as heck, but if gets more and more painful to read.
Thanks for the chapter!

YAP! hope for the love of all Gay things! we GET PROGRESS !!! lile come one this chapter the frustration was already to an boiling point! so now that we know they like each other WAY delay the proggress!

yeah its pretty poorly executed as far as these fluffy romcoms go but the fluff itself is excellent, even if it always leads into "oOps haha!! sorry lets change tbe subject!n"
all i'm saying is there better be a good payoff. i feel like a lot of times theres more romantic and sexual tension in the "misunderstandings" than there is when they finally get together, then it'll just end up with a light kiss and a shot of them holding hands with "fin" at the bottom.
do you think i need to take a break from reading yuri

yeah, really hate that type of situation…..and unfortunately because i will love to get more yuri with adults i end up looking for the +18 one shots to get read of all that sexual tension XD cuz i sware i get bean blue from all of that

That was still just her cheek LOL

no? it wasn’t on the cheek this time!!!

Should this be tagged “age gap”?

there is no yuri tag nor romance tag

Oh man, I love it when all the characters are some degree of messed up. The parents get first prize for being messed up though, of course. I hope they can, uh, heal from all that trauma and perhaps start to find some stability at some point? Though their current relationship doesn't seem set up to promote stability.

well, that doesn’t seemn to be as important tho, she got out of the marriage and even got some funds for a new life sooo i don’t think she actually cares what kind of relationship they have

I still find it really fucked up and disgusting that the only way she will feel closer with Rika is if she makes porn with the men that fucked her Crush……..yaikes!

It is, but at the same time, she still have a crush over somebody she hasn't met in ten years... I mean, her crush is probably not the same person anymore. I do understand lingering feelings, but being desperate to that point is not healthy. I guess, it's for her the beginning of her healing process.

that is true >.>

Poly ending briefly gazed at and then promptly averted. It's good that Nadeshiko finally knows what she wants now, too bad Akane is way too dumb to do anything about it :P

the majority of people won’t work, especially since there are not many interested, and no i don’t believe humans are made for poly like LOL

Ugh... Gross. I don't get this obsession with yuri authors to push the story towards "yay pregnancy!" with lesbian couples...

As others have pointed out, this isn't a real thing. Hard to "get" something that doesn't exist. Considering that procreation is an incredibly basic biological drive common not just to humans but to all life (cuz any species that didn't have it, didn't reproduce and so they're, like, gone), it's almost surprising how very little yuri has anything about it.

i mean, what do you wanna lesbians to do? adopt? lol sure, that is the only solution honestly since the other solution is expensive and you LITERALLY chose what man seed you really need to shove inside you with a needle , sorry that most lesbians don’t think of getting pregnant and adoption is not so desirable any way,

mostly what do you think Lesbians will do in Japan were you can’t adopt if you are gay? like the idea of tormenting an child in an society they will hate your parents like lool good luck

also there is no proof of the idea of an supposed stupid internal clock that makes your brain crave men to get baby! like LOL

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I still find it really fucked up and disgusting that the only way she will feel closer with Rika is if she makes porn with the men that fucked her Crush……..yaikes!

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the "plot" adds a lot of unintentional comedy

it adds garbage, wasn’t funny since this is an hentai any way, it took from the what was supposed to be hot sex but the author needed to add some weird “we are eating cake with friends while we toe fuck one another”

Ending feels rushed and cold, which is a different vibe from the rest of the series. Something I like about this author is that they're able to make soft, fluffy relationships even from an aroace perspective, but this felt off. Was the series cancelled and cut short or something?

I disagree, I thought the ending was very fitting. But regardless of that, how was this series aro? When the characters are have explicitly expressed that they are in love?

Way late seeing this, but you don't seem to know what aromantic is? It doesn't mean two (or more) people can't love each other if they're on the aro-spectrum. It means they don't do the whole typical romance thing, or take some things but leave some things. The relationship in this series and Crescent Moon and Doughnuts is clearly queerplatonic-ish at least.

yeah, your right with the way the relationship has been in this manga it does remind me of Crescent Moon and Doughnuts, tho i don’t like Crescent Moon, i didn’t even finish it once i found out it’s aro since I’m not relating at all with the whole we are best friends +2, without full blown romance it just doesn’t click with me

now that i think about it there are quite a lot of yuri mangas that are quite thin on the romance aspect! either the author didn’t wanna go full blown to show the relationship or they did the whole” we are together at the end” so that’s way i will avoid the whole aro thingy if there is a story like that

i wish there was more! like another chapter were they are together!!!

some yuri fans are a type of masochist that SOMEHOW enjoy subtext! i won’t ever be able to endure this type of torture for 70 chapters

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the only good thing from this author is reading the comments here every so often! i do wander way does the author loves to write garbage humans and NTR so much, the only thing i think is because it’s fiction so/or the author might have an fetish for garbage women.

Oooo from the author of Swap Swap!

So far this chapter was cute, but nothing groundbreaking. I'm curious what the author has in store though since I adored Swap Swap.

so the story wasn’t bad for a first chapter, but you needed to day some bad about the story anyway! the majority of the Yuri stories aren’t “groundbreaking” in the LEAST, do you remind every one that every time you read a story?

it will had been something else if some one was praising the story to hell and back so you can remind them this ain’t “groundbreaking”

ah i remember way this part of the story rubs me really bad in the wrong way, i really hate this part because we are talking about Mira here were they can’t do good story so they should stick to hentai cuz up untill now none of their supposed “romance” stories were well written in terms of characters and plot.

Also this topic were Lesbians has to pretebd to be straight makes my blood boil, this part of the story is written like shit, i did read stories with parts like this, and i understand them! not like it never happen, but for fuks sakes! Mira blows ass on this part of the story