That whole segment with the plant girl was weirdly off-beat. A cute monstergirl offers to let the MC pee on her, and suddenly the MC is totally not a super perv who'd absolutely do that?
It's like they were both trying to do a pervy tsukomi routine on the other so the girl who's in the not-pervert role temporarily becomes not-a-pervert when it's her turn.
I think there is a Delta between Regular sex jokes and Golden Showers
^Yup- the first major series Mochi did (I think?) Kasumi and Acchan - 17 chapters of quality regular yuri without incest or messed up plot at all :) (and maybe still their best work as much as I also love most of mochi's incest stuff too).
It actually had a diffrent title before But it got changed to the much more generic current title, i cant remember The old title however
looks more like it will become more stupid over time if you ask me. While I know it´s possible to confuse the gender of the person in front of you they are literally in the same class. did they never have PE together and wondered why the "boy" is in their changing room.
As a Yuri fanboy I will of course read it. the artstyle is more than nice enough and I want to see how unrealistic stupid they will get over time.
But looking at it objectively this is incredibly weak.
They are in college, so no shared PE anymore... IIRC.
That misunderstanding was so contrived if there had been a panel that just said "RANDOM MISUNDERSTANDING HAPPENS HERE" it'd have roughly the same narrative quality ...
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