Always comes at the cost of the quality of the story. If it's character-driven, it needs to flow at the pace that makes sense for the characters, not what's good for "we can sell more volumes this way". It's not always a complete catastrophe, but, heck, there's plenty of romance writers out there who manage 800-page novels without having anything stuck in limbo forever.
But they don't base their entire relationships about 1 single idea that as soon as it gets resolved essentially ends their story.
(also it's frustrating that editors nowadays seem too often to be as much about how to sabotage a good thing as actually making a story good ^^)
... and Mari seems to prefer keep hoping for Arisa to somehow figuring out things on her own rather than actually taking the lead.
Yes, I was initially hoping that "progress" would actually be Mari kinda getting more pro-active now that she has "no choice" while Arisa simultaneously kinda starts remembering things, so both would progress towards some physical relationship again and have some character development going on.
Doesn't seem quite the route it takes which I find a bit of a shame, but, well. It's still OK, for me. This is only 16 chapters so far; ask me again at 30 ;)
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