Couple things I like about this
1. woman dressed up like a guy didn't wait to reveal it thus turning into surprise borderline-you're-not-a-guy-rape scenario
2. actually had some cute dialogue amongst the sex and happy end

overall very good for something that's really just meant to be a nsfw doujin. Almost wish there was more to see how their relationship develops.

damn she flew

Tbh it totally has that 'open ended one shot' vibe but I'm glad to see one like this continue

It didn't take long until cancerous comment complaining about pedo bullshit started kicking in. Fuck off and don't read age gap if you don't like it, will ya?

uhhh no one was being anywhere close to "cancerous" so maybe take your tone down a little and back up, dude lol

anyway I tend to steer clear of age gap that includes a child unable to truly consent but fortunately the approach here is very much an innocent romantic attraction and I'm very invested to see where it evolves from here.

I keep reading the first chapter even though it hurts so much cause I want more ...

It's hard to tell if she's unhappy going to the restaurant with her husband because she know who she'll see, or if she's not entirely happy with their relationship.

anyway, interesting beginning that dragged me in for sure.

oh no it hurts

The pairings seem pretty obvious as to where they'll end up, but it may be worth including Love Triangle for people who might want to avoid ensuing feelings of sadness.

This is actually awful to try and comprehend. Like someone else said, everything is a mess. The author can't pace art, story and dialogue to save their life. This is a hard pass from me.

okay this was so cute i got cavities. i just want a continuation now where they go on a date or something mundane

wow wholesome

I love this series. I like the side stories it follows. I don't understand people calling it boring when it's just a slow burn. Not every series is going to be straight to the point with everything. That's not how real people are, either. I might feel differently depending on how it ends but I think it's been shown clearly Uta and Kaoru don't really know what they want, and it's their own confusion that keeps them from getting where they need to in their lives

good... end ..?

I should have known from the author that the story was going to be hot trash. They prioritize het relationships over anything else, makes it never worth reading them, but I thought 'hey maybe this one will be good' but nah. ditch this nonsense.

this one makes me wish it was a series, or longer, cause I feel like a slightly longer build up to the relationship would have been nice and it seemed kind of interesting with knights and such.

magic babies

YOOOO guess what series just got a localization announcement from VIZ!!

https://twitter.com/VIZMedia/status/1107087911541972993

the bi woman missed dicks so she went out to find em ,
the end .

this is why we should never trust bi women lolol

please for the love of god stop slandering bi women. that's not at all what has implied to have happened here and this nonsensical kind of hate is just toxicity at its finest. these kinds of situations can happen in any relationship regardless of orientation.

anyway it was a sad realistic read. it's something that could have been solved with communication but that can be hard for people.

Yeah, i was wondering why the hate ?

It's called bait and you all fell for it.

bait or not it should be called out and addressed as it's targeted harassment. if there was a report button i'd gladly use it but we don't have one, so drawing attention to it is the best we got.

the bi woman missed dicks so she went out to find em ,
the end .

this is why we should never trust bi women lolol

please for the love of god stop slandering bi women. that's not at all what has implied to have happened here and this nonsensical kind of hate is just toxicity at its finest. these kinds of situations can happen in any relationship regardless of orientation.

anyway it was a sad realistic read. it's something that could have been solved with communication but that can be hard for people.

oh good gravy i want more from tMnR... I love their art, their ideas for stories even non-romantic like this one.. i crave it cause they just seem like they have so many interesting ideas

this chapter was a whole lot of feels man. please let kotone realize she is normal and get a girlfriend.

I don't know if I'm prepared for the emotional roller coaster we bout to go through after this.

Also I still think the story cheaped out with the whole cheating husband.. literally the most generic and weak plot point in any unrequited romance series. but at least the Happy!End seems more likely

Unrelated to that aside, these two chapters turned my opinion about the series and I'm excited to see where it goes from here. Hime and Akira are precious, I want to see the slow build to their relationship being something a little more... if Hime can build up the guts to tell her.

Calorie Monster

Hime is very tomboyish for sure, but I hope that's not her defining reasoning if she comes out as a trans guy especially after being called a "boy" because she's outwardly aggressive. That'd just be sort of poor writing in my eyes as it just plays into gender stereotypes to begin with. minor nitpick, I guess, but I hate the concept that you have to act stereotypically feminine/masculine to be trans. Mermaid Line with Ayumi and Aika handled this REALLY well for how short it was. Will be interesting to follow though I suppose.