this was soo good. And it's the little things I love, like that frantic kiss in the beginning, then how Kanade swiings her legs over Fumiko's back god I love it and it just kept getting better. Just awesome.
Though at times it felt more like action fighting scenes than sex haha. But still great :)

Oh damn right girl right onto head first confrontation i absolutely love it you tell 'er!

Well that was kind of obscure and salty but sweet I guess? Got too little of a taste to really determine the flavor though

Once again pure bliss has been bestowed upon us

This is Tokoharu's levek of cuteness omfg

Never left a comment for this? Well better late than never: fucking A+dorable

I liked it :) adorably awkward, should be more stuff out there like this ^^

A+ for the Imagine Me & You reference in the credits.

Best quote from that movie.

Omg I didn't even notice it

Hahaha love theze kind of short cute stories :)

Meh. Not my style.

Thanks for the update :)

I'm so sorry this is too much I can't just XDDD

This artist deserves more praise c:

kind of a letdown from the title…. I was expecting… more...

...I don't actually want to ask do I.

I'm inclined to agree yeah.

Yeah I found the title ominous and frightening...

Glad it was everything but though

I agree, it's kinda stilted. I like the art, the angst, the fluff. But the plot hints at half-a-dozen things that it doesn't really flesh out. It could've been twice as long for all the things it brought in but didn't tie up. Still, not bad.

Exactly

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The drastic chage XD

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Overwatch is such a wonderful gift to yuri ;-;

Gold gold worth more than gold omfg

Meigetsu's gaydar is on point. Can't wait for them to actually become an item though.

Hey update! Thanks so much!!!!

Well that was just absurd XD

^Uh, wut?

didn't even realize how much I rambled on. it's getting too late for this shit

tl;dr and less sloppy:
good art, good sex scenes but shit character interaction. I blame the implementation of bad hentai tropes for the downfall of this potentially great short story

basically what "Nya-chan" said but more aimlessly in my own words

Amen.

This. This is a gem. I love it. Everything. Just....

Whoaw I completely forgot about this is it already Christmas or what?

I fins this tragedy so far though... Hoping on a bit less bitterness next chapter :c