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telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

This is one of those one-shots where you can say: "Yuri, or not yuri? That is the question."

Well it's at least one-sided. That is coming from Hanaoka, Saki is probably just that awkward.

But a couple of missed things. Page 2 she's 'saying' Nanaoka instead of Hanaoka and page 20 last panel 'imagine if (it) got into my room somehow'

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

On page 14 in the second bubble of the first panel there's an additional 'change' that is unnecessary.
And on page 19 the third to last bubble "that's" is spelled tha'ts.

Otherwise I enjoyed it :]

joined Mar 25, 2013

The Fubuki Class ship girl diary is missing, it's translated so I'm leaving a comment here for the modders/uploaders :] Here it is http://g.e-hentai.org/g/735980/0e81ec8b2a/

last edited at Jun 9, 2015 7:06PM

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Can please some give me the right order which chapter i need to read first? So i can reread all in the right way

Presumably Gentle Lullaby -> Feverish Fingertips -> Feverish Tiptoes -> Home Sweet Home (as of yet untranslated) -> Embrace Me in the Dark -> Mushiyaki's C87 doujin (whatever that means)

This is taken from the 3rd post on Feverish Fingertips, namely satsunyan's.

last edited at Jun 9, 2015 2:49PM

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Damn, that's a shame. At least it didn't leave it on a too big cliffhanger. Hopefully though it will come out by the end of the year xD

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Hmm, is the second book out yet, or is it delayed again?

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Random chapter strikes again, and yet again it's an abandoned manga. Such a shame.

telamon
LOVE/DEATH discussion 25 May 12:34
joined Mar 25, 2013

Don't think about it too much, this is supposed to be a comedic take on various romantic tropes.

I think the tone changed in this one, though. Shou's a lot more defensive in chapter 5's fight than any of the others. And the ending had Shou yelling at Akkii rather than their standing next to each other, flushed and fidgeting. I fear the author is trying to move the story away from the double yandere thing...

They were yelling at each other since the start, and in the last panel even if it doesn't show it it's basically the same ending as the previous chapters.

People have started being waaaay more paranoid. Guess that's what happens when all we get is angst/drama doujins/manga.

last edited at May 25, 2015 12:36PM

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

^ You guys should read Present by Uso Kurata then. The angst and drama tags for it imply something heavy but it's not at all. Some mod should remove them xD

last edited at May 25, 2015 11:24AM

telamon
LOVE/DEATH discussion 25 May 03:52
joined Mar 25, 2013

I thought the light-haired girl guarding the door was Aika...am I wrong?

Also I have mixed feelings about Shouko seeming to forgive Akki so easily at the end. I mean she basically stabbed in the eye and pushed around about a misunderstanding. It's good Shouko accepts and loves Akki so readily and can forgive her as soon as the misunderstanding is cleared up but...well I don't know how healthy the relationship can actually get if Akki remains so untrusting and jealous.

You seem to forget that both are like that, it just so happened this time that Akki got jealous.

If you look back it's always Akki initiating though. I think Shouko just is always ready to retaliate. If Akki never got jealous, the fights would never happen.

So what about the time where they were talking about sex and Shouko swung first? Or the previous chapter where Shouko fired at Akki's head. This isn't about the jealousy but about who starts the fights. Admittedly the jealousy so far it's been only from Akki's side, but I have no doubt that Shouko would react like that as well.

Don't think about it too much, this is supposed to be a comedic take on various romantic tropes.

telamon
Philosophia discussion 24 May 20:28
joined Mar 25, 2013

I agree with you!! specially on the black bar parts u_u
What will you read? I need something too, I re-read this to make some sense..it was even worse

I'm not sure. Maybe "The Structural Formula of First Love", more probably and specifically "Backshot" to begin with. It has the right balance between mischief and tenderness I need in this moment.

I'd recommend Drip or Sweet Exercise/Examination

telamon
Philosophia discussion 24 May 20:03
joined Mar 25, 2013

Sorry about the mix-up, I was told we were missing a chapter but I should've checked myself. Thanks for your assistance! (Hopefully we have everything right now)

For now we're going to go with a pseudo-doujinshi numbering (i.e. based on the original numbering but not totally accurate). This will be revisited when me and dpf have some more time to talk it over.

It's good now, or at least I think. I wouldn't know if there are more chapters to this, but it doesn't seem like it. The continuity is preserved so yeah. Plus http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/philosophia_ch04#66 I don't know if that's all volumes but it probably shows all of them.

last edited at May 24, 2015 8:03PM

telamon
Philosophia discussion 24 May 17:10
joined Mar 25, 2013

Well that was my mistake, saying it was her brother. Should've read closely, but still yeah, it should be more than a 20 year gap between the 'new' Tomo and Ai. Plus the final chapter was.. I don't know.. It's pointless.

And I'll say it again chapter 3.5 and chapter 5 are the same thing. If someone could tell a mod?

telamon
Philosophia discussion 24 May 14:15
joined Mar 25, 2013

Half of the fun of stories like this is to come read the comments of confused and disappointed people trying to find their sickeningly sweet fluffy times ending. To be fair this one did not quite earn the ending it tried to sell, some of the drama was a bit, hmm, sudden and flimsily established to really be convincing. Ah well. There have certainly been more convoluted developments, and Ai seems content enough with where she ended up though the eerily similar looking half-sibling (I forgot the gender!) of Tomo seemed unnecessary. If anything I am kind of fed up with lack of fluff always labeled sad and/or bad around here.

It's her brother (half), but you gotta say, the reveal in the final chapter came out of nowhere. so it was kind of bad.

telamon
Philosophia discussion 24 May 14:08
joined Mar 25, 2013

I am not a fan of the ending...I would be okay with the ending if it ended when Tomo left. That after story, to me, was kind of shitty...especially the appearance of a new character who resembles Tomo Why can't it just be Tomo. I really enjoyed the story, but not very much the ending.

The reveal of Tomo being a pimp comes from nowhere and clashes so bad with the story themes that comes off like being added just for drama's sake

That's her brother.

Also chapter 5 is already on here as 3.5

telamon
LOVE/DEATH discussion 24 May 10:18
joined Mar 25, 2013

I thought the light-haired girl guarding the door was Aika...am I wrong?

Also I have mixed feelings about Shouko seeming to forgive Akki so easily at the end. I mean she basically stabbed in the eye and pushed around about a misunderstanding. It's good Shouko accepts and loves Akki so readily and can forgive her as soon as the misunderstanding is cleared up but...well I don't know how healthy the relationship can actually get if Akki remains so untrusting and jealous.

You seem to forget that both are like that, it just so happened this time that Akki got jealous.

telamon
Stretch discussion 23 May 12:59
joined Mar 25, 2013

This page, yessss.

I'd imagine that and the 'bird head' one will get the most comments xD

telamon
Stretch discussion 23 May 12:34
joined Mar 25, 2013

The Volume 3 extra has been translated

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Yes. Yukiko originally drew them as random yuri OCs, and then made a 4-koma series out of them.

edit: I'll note that they aren't exactly the same as back then (Sakurako is a huge perv in those older pictures...) but they certainly have their roots from those yuri collections of Yukiko's.

Any chance for them being translated and get thrown in as extras alongside the chapters? Perhaps a page per chapter? That would be really nice, and that way you wouldn't have to translate them in one go.

Those are actually included in the tank, so you will be seeing them as we release more chapters.

The pixiv ones? Awesome, I'll be looking forward to them then (:

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Yes. Yukiko originally drew them as random yuri OCs, and then made a 4-koma series out of them.

edit: I'll note that they aren't exactly the same as back then (Sakurako is a huge perv in those older pictures...) but they certainly have their roots from those yuri collections of Yukiko's.

Any chance for them being translated and get thrown in as extras alongside the chapters? Perhaps a page per chapter? That would be really nice, and that way you wouldn't have to translate them in one go.

last edited at May 23, 2015 11:49AM

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

I don't even want to go outside if it's over 20°C.

Finally someone who gets it!

I know right? While everyone else is out enjoying the summer sun like crazy people, I'm off in the corner, melting.

20 degrees is fine, when it gets over 23 though.

joined Mar 25, 2013

Why do I have the feeling if she continues going along with Suwako she's gonna break. Really not healthy.

telamon
Green Day discussion 22 May 03:11
joined Mar 25, 2013

What are you saying, that was not depressing at all.. This is not a fic..

telamon
Image Comments 21 May 03:21
joined Mar 25, 2013
Korrasami_boop_by_kathrynlayno-d8bteka

There is one titled "Search and Destroy' by the same author, you could count it as a sequel xD

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Where??? I can't find it do you have a link? PLZ?!

The guys that translated this will translate the doujin as well so have some patience, it will pop up sometime.