My God. What a mess of a story. EMA and Ana make no sense on their behaviour. Asagi Ryuu may made a name for themselves but he/she certainly is no Mira when It comes to "porn with plot"
Agree, it's always so random, like a really bad straight porno.
Yeah and... I don't know and I wouldn't call It "pacing", but there is something odd of how the story "flows" in the pages, like the sequences and transitions from one square to the other are a little off-putting. I can't put my finger on it...
It might be because character relations are heavily explored, but then you get the the plot and you forget that they have a life outside crazy toxic Yuri relationships. The flow suffers if manga magic can 'develop' a character. Outside of relationships, everyone is a flat character with one dimensional deduction making, which is not explained. Also, I noticed weird emphasis on awkward panty shots everywhere. I get it's porn with plot, but there's not much porn. I'm just here to finish this at this point