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EvilDevil
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pg 26, "We're going to have you all a ride..." ("We're going to give you all a ride'')

http://otakutalk.org/img/026.jpg

fixed page

EvilDevil
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pg 26, "We're going to have you all a ride..." ("We're going to give you all a ride'')

http://otakutalk.org/img/026.jpg

fixed page

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joined May 28, 2011

pg 07, "see more it" (more of it)

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What's with pgs 26-27 in ch 12?

EvilDevil
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Nanashi no Asterism ch 8, pg 19, "childhood freinds" (friends)
fixed
https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/11/oh-brave-new-world-that-has-such-people.html

EvilDevil
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EvilDevil
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pg 26, "We're going to have you all a ride..." ("We're going to give you all a ride'')

EvilDevil
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YukaRei

there is an error in pg 09, “at least take off ayour gloves” (“your” not “ayour”) fixed
https://mai88eternalscarlet.wordpress.com/2016/11/19/doujinshi-18-yukarei/

EvilDevil
YukaRei discussion 20 Nov 08:19
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there is an error in pg 09, “at least take off ayour gloves” (“your” not “ayour”) fixed
https://mai88eternalscarlet.wordpress.com/2016/11/19/doujinshi-18-yukarei/

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joined May 28, 2011

pg 10, "I wonder if you have you some spare time later?" (second "you" needs to be deleted)

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pg 15 should be "you still need (help) with...

EvilDevil
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I saw this on another site before it made its way to Dynasty, and I was having the same problem. It appears to be more of a stylistic choice that makes it really... difficult... to understand. Very strange choice, from my perspective, to substitute thought bubbles for speech bubbles on the MC.

It's not just that though. There's an incoherent feel to the dialogue. All of the characters seem to use an odd syntax and respond oddly to each other

I suspect those that know/understand the mc, are able to read her thoughts because she is so shy so they know her well enought(?)

EvilDevil
Go Go Pre discussion 15 Nov 07:50
EvilDevil
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[Haresaku (Akaiken)] Go Go Pre

typo on pg 6 was fixed ("by" changed to "buy")

https://exhentai.org/s/d05731721a/996336-6

EvilDevil
It's Autumn discussion 15 Nov 00:27
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pg 2, "whom from?" (shouldnt that be "from whom?"?)
pg 8, "I'll just be borrowing this a spell." (weird wording)

last edited at Nov 15, 2016 12:32AM

EvilDevil
Go Go Pre discussion 14 Nov 00:25
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pg 6, "going to by donuts" (buy)

EvilDevil
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Nanashi no Asterism chapter 4

Typos on page 24 and 29 fixed and reuploaded.

https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/11/sit-then-and-talk-with-her.html

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that lewd hand holding

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harem in my yuri?

EvilDevil
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Did they just start doing it in the back of the van with the woman driving in the front? Insatiable, jesus.

yeah, I was wondering about that too! Is she watching?

EvilDevil
Magan&Danai discussion 09 Nov 06:02
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Series marked as Dropped, ch18 folder called Last ep :(

;_;