Nora
come take a bite XD .. shower me all with this awesome-sauce you've got here XD
I do like to bite, especially the tender spot, and then gently lick off my bite mark. You are not ready for the magic sauce yet. You need to be cooked for a little more. XD
ah, it's not about changing anybody's mind.. more like explaining how we got here and why it makes sense. Even if we all teamed up on one side.. it doesn't affect the ending nor it is my goal to do so.
There are too many possible explanations of how we get here, which gives me to a mixed feeling of whether this is considered good writing or full of plot holes. You can only leave a story as "open to interpretation" to certain extent. Something as fundamental as Seju's grand scheme (or the lack of it) should have been clearly stated by now, assuming we only have 1-3 chapters left. You should not need to talk yourself in cycle over and over again unless
1. you are conversing with retards.
2. you are indeed delusional.
3. the authors have gone too far with their concealing game, as a result missed a good chunk of their readers.
(3.5. we are too impatient for this story :3)
This is my pending criticism. Will finalize it once the story ends.
Meg
I wrote this, "We'll agree to disagree. Sometimes I wonder what's the point."
Meh, it is not even evil. Work harder! spank
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