I'm shocked that Canno decided to write a one-shot instead of cramming more characters into their main story.

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Was hard to ignore something with that combination of tags. Many "Historical masturbation" jokes followed.
I might not mind this. The writer pays a lot of attention to detail which makes the kisses nice. Plus I like the combination of tropes.
If we can just keep that historical masturbation at a minimum I might really enjoy this.

So, just to theorize...
Did she have such a hardcore crush on an assistant of hers that it managed to turn her fluffy for a short period?
Just a thought.

Tracing aside, this was an absolute favorite of mine when I first started reading yuri. I read it on Mangafucks. What days those were...
And I actually rather remember why. The dialogue feels incredibly natural. There isn't this air of fake manga-ness surrounding it, they talk like actual high school girls. I always appreciate realism in my yuri.

The chins... so pointy. So very pointy.
The art looks pretty nice except Nozomi. Something about the way she's drawn just looks off to me. Really doesn't get the cool beauty effect right imo.

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How nice that the part-timer turned out to be female. I was afraid I had walked into a yuri manga only to not actually ship a yuri pairing. That would've been awkward.

I actually get really into this when I sit down and read the whole thing, but I have to do that every time a new chapter is released or else I'm confused as hell.

I liked the bad end tag, and I don't see why it can't work as just a quick joke. It references the community's attitude, not the facts. Nothing wrong with one little joke tag.
Plus, it served as a nice warning.

The premise was 'one girl has a crush on another girl and tried to talk to her'. Not 'the love lives on the people of x high school/neighborhood'.

Well yes, that's the premise you want. Not sure it's certain that's the premise the author is working from.

Yes, my point is that the premise must be established in the beginning so that the audience knows what they're reading/watching. It's way too late to establish the premise right now. At first we always have exposition where we get to know the characters and their motivations and then we go into the narrative. You can't just go into the narrative and then decide to focus more on the other side characters without having given any hint in the first place whatsoever.

This. This. This. This. This. This. This.

This series was so cute at the beginning and now it has become so... I can't even find an appropriate word.
She had an abusive boyfriend from whom she was running away. The same boyfriend who tried to kidnap her because he wanted her being only his. And we have to find it funny that he kidnapped the wrong person and therefore he apologized in a 'comical' way? From the very moment that the ex girlfriend appeared this manhwa has had a really boring plot and moreover it has ended like this... Disappointing. Really disappointing.

Anyway, thanks for all your effort in the translation.

Glad somebody else said it so I don't have to.
Apart from not being able to find any sort of consistent mood, a lot of the more light-hearted scenes are just cringe-worthy. I'm trying to get back my original liking for this, but I can't seem to find it.

I don't think it's the concept of yaoi that bothers many of us, as much as the fact that the main relationship is being held off for it. It's a horrible way to introduce a side couple.

Was this drawn in Paint with the crayon tool?

Art doesn't appeal to my eyes but squishy train scenes do, so I'm up for it.

Seems like very, very little happened in these chapters, though, so I wish the author had released more at once.

Usually don't like age gap yuri because it tends to pull out all the cliches, but this one does it pretty well. Only thing that bothers me is how old Hanaoka's hairstyle makes her look. Quite minor, though, and it's not too hard to look around.

Far too complicated of characters to work in a one-shot, honestly.

Of everything here to be updated on Valentines Day,
This.
Yes.

I preferred the old name, wah.

I do plan to continue using the term in my daily life, however.

My god, that dialogue was incredible.

Dammit I love this author. Yuri seldom gets to this level of trope-bending, progression, and general writing skill anymore.

This > Boobs & butts anyday,

NSFW this chapter is.

In fact, there's more effort put into shading those nipples than any other drawing in this entire manga.

'It's the second time reading this, so I won't cry," I said.

No, self, that's not how this works.

Ugh... I have to say this. Or else.

Twins are (almost) identical only if they are both girls or both boys. If they are a girl and a boy, they can be as similar as two non-twin siblings. That's because "identical" twins come from a split ovule (that is, same DNA: same chromosomes XX or same chromosomes XY) and non-identical twins come from two different ovules (different DNA; could be two girls, two boys, or girl and boy).
This is not hidden information. People learn this at primary school. So why why why do writers, mangakas, film makers, why do they omit this fact? I don't buy they ignore this!

aah now that I have let off steam I feel I am open to read any nonsense.

As true as this is, fraternal twins can end up looking nearly identical. I knew a set of twins in middle school whom everyone was shocked to find out they were fraternal. Rare? Possibly, I don't know the statistics. But it does happen. Even if the DNA is different, it can end up being very, very close.

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I hadn't even noticed the season names in this. It was a lot more obvious in the other manga, one of the titles it went by being Haru Natsu Aki Fuyu and all. Thank you for pointing that out, definitely makes it more interesting regarding Akiho and Fuyumi.

To be honest they are pretty common. At least in mangas. And usually they don't have deeper meaning. Can't come up with names for the cast? Just go with seasons!

True, that's probably why I don't usually notice them. But if all the seasons are covered, I think it can be used to make some guesses about the future storyline. If, in some mystical imaginary manga, the three main characters were named Akina, Harumi, and Natsume, and all of a sudden a Fuyuka comes along, you can bet she'll be more significant than just a minor plot device.

I know this is kinda off-topic. The 1st manga I'd ever read with these puns names was Zaou Taishi and Eiki Eiki's but with the different names. Both Akiho and Fuyuka were "normal" except Akiho's breasts groped by Haruka and Fuyuka pursued by Natsuki but Fuyuka was so aggresive when it come to bed which she dominated Natsuki twice ( I think).
For me, Swap<=>Swap is the 2nd. Haruko and Natsuko kissed accidentally but it will different with Akiho and Fuyumi. If they are swappers, I want to know the reason why since (honestly) I don't read the entire raw chapters but i got a few raw images including these four in panel.

I hadn't even noticed the season names in this. It was a lot more obvious in the other manga, one of the titles it went by being Haru Natsu Aki Fuyu and all. Thank you for pointing that out, definitely makes it more interesting regarding Akiho and Fuyumi.

"I meant to wipe the sweat off her neck but I licked it instead," is about as realistic as, "I tripped and my dick fell in her vagina."

A little too cliche for me. "She can never know about all the things I want to do to her..." is something I've heard way too many times, I can't handle it anymore.

I strongly approve of the message. "Take a second, stop thinking about me, and actually think about yourself and your own ambitions for once." Much approve, I wish real people spoke such truths.