This doujin is hilarious and the art is really, really good (helps the author is actually an animator by trade) Shame Akira is only name dropped and doesn't actually shows up.

As for the odd characterizations, there are two reasons for that: rule of funny and the author preferences. She admitted to not being really fond of neither Hibiki or Mamori.

Mana is actually the second most popular girl. Momo is the first.

And Japan doesn't really likes outgoing, forceful personalities on their girls. Even less on blondes. Viola was downright ignored on the retailer bonus for the Bikini Party Edition

Sadly, Viola is the least popular of the cast in Japan.

The authors were on some amazing drugs.

And now, edited thanks to awesome anons at /u/

EDIT:

This blog will kill me with cuteness

http://askmamoriandmirei.tumblr.com/post/153663080344/do-the-two-of-you-go-on-dates-often

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Translation courtesy of /u/

Mamori: My name is Tokonome Mamori. I'm 16 years old.
Everyone: It's nice to meet you!"

Ranka: Heh~ Tokonome, huh? That's an unusual name.

Ranka: How do you write it down?

Mamori: Um...
Mamori: Vir...
Mamori: gin...

Mamori: I never expected it to be this damaging...
Mirei: ....!!
Mirei: Grrr
Ranka: Huh!?
Ranka: Did I say something bad...
Ranka: That's a scary look!!

Rinka: You're pretty good at wielding a sword, Mirei-chan.
Mirei: Your swordsmanship is pretty hard to read, Rinka. That was a close match.
Rinka: Really!? If you'd like, maybe we can battle another time?
Mirei: Yeah, of course.

Ranka: Hey, Kuzuryu. Whaddaya think of that?
Momo: ...Hmm

Ranka: Hey, Mirei!! Don't cling onto my sister!!
Mirei: I'm not really clinging onto her...
Mamori & Koharu: Woof woof woof woof

You could try posting at the Valkyrie Drive thread on /u/ the artist is a regular there.

As I've said earlier. Hana to Hina while enjoyable, is pretty generic and simplistic. Akin to a fast food meal, it does its job and keeps you satisfied but is ultimately shallow and forgettable.

Those two are so cute together.

Wow! All of that seems pretty neat, I look forward to your next commission and hopefully you can make that doujin a reality in the near future.

Valkyrie Drive really has the best fans.

As amusing and adorable as it is, I have to admit I got teared up at Chewbacca and Nitori's sidestory.

That looks pretty good!

Gotta say, I'm pretty impressed for you to have become such a fan of these two.

To add on this, the format is also a poor choice to present small scenes between couples since it fails to generate investment on the characters, is like coming midway through a movie and then being swapped by another one after five minutes.

Of course, this isn't an issue if the characters are the same through the different stories but at that point you might as well go to read Collectors instead.

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The manga's title is in spanish but no cute/hot latina lesbians in sight.

I'm very disappointed.

On a side note, an author should be ready for little criticism for his/her work. I wrote fanfiction too and i got good comments and some bad too. So yeah enduring criticism is what author must have.

You're absolutely correct. Criticism is necessary for improvement whether you're doing something just for fun or professionally.

This pretty awesome artist is working on a really funny and cute doujin about the aftermath of the anime's ending. This is just a small taste of it

And she was kind enough to compile all of her work in a handy zip for everyone to enjoy

http://www.mediafire.com/file/a6pbrsf55lthak4/Valkyrie_Drive.zip

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So, is the game dead or simply in a hiatus?

Yup

Also, CUTE!!!!!

http://askmamoriandmirei.tumblr.com/post/153238430439/when-will-you-two-lovely-girls-finally-tie-the

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Rinka, Manpukumaru, and Koharu started as swell folks and continued to be the pillars of the cast’s and player’s morale. Manpukumaru must be protected.

Ranka has made an olympic tier effort to transform from a sure-fire spark-plug who won’t back down and won’t doubt the people around her into the wishiest washiest wuss around who can’t seem to do anything unless Rinka is with her or agrees with her.

Viola went from arrogance personified with a face you want to make you its bitch as much as you want to punch it…to a brash yet approachable friend who is super fucking gay for Koharu (Koharu being quietly yet obviously gay for her in return).

And topping even Ranka’s upsetting 180 is Mana, who went from Bhikkuni’s resident sweetheart shaped like a friend to power hungry backstabber who spent every night developing a resting bitchface so she could properly let everyone know who will be winning this year’s “Biggest Asshole” award.

Heh, pretty accurate

The continuation was already translated and typesetted by /u/

To give Sayaka a plot arc independent from Touko and Yuu.

Based Sayaka strikes again.

Although honestly, as sweet as it was to see put her senpai in place, if she is not seen again it will be kind of meaningless in the long run.

What did I just read?

Yup.

As you can see, there's no real difference on size between the Girlfriends volume and other mangas that I picked randomly from my collection

Now to be fair, thanks to the current exchange rate mangas in Mexico are actually pretty damn cheap in american dollars. Around 4 bucks a pop but for our usual rates they are kind of pricey. Now, a regular manga runs more or less for $3.5 or $4.00 dollars tops (and the only manga to hit that price is One Punch Man). Girlfriends? $5.00 and is a regular volume with seven chapters.