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EvilDevil
Love Siesta discussion 28 Dec 21:49
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Mistake on Love Siesta, updated pg 13 http://g.e-hentai.org/s/df06a2209f/1010820-13

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 17, "That's probably I kept seeing you confessed to so many times..." ("That's probably why I kept...")

"And everytime I get really worried" should be "I got really worried"

I fixed them and updated the exhentai version, but I'm unsure if it's possible to add an updated version here.

dynasty has updated the pg, thanks

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

error in pg 08, "what do you want do" (should be "what do you want to do")

EvilDevil
Love Siesta discussion 28 Dec 02:45
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 13 should say "the only one that can make you happy", missing "one".

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

https://twitter.com/merumeruchann/status/813893524584353792

Announcement: Innocent Grey's Flowers (Summer) is coming in English in 2017 and I will be translating it!!!
http://flowersgame.com/flowers---le-volume-sur-ete--.html

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

https://twitter.com/takano_wf/status/813718652176318466
https://twitter.com/takano_wf/status/786506393935228928

Yoshioka Sakaki (Mermaid Lovers etc) will start a new serialized yuri manga in Dengeki G's Comic under the Takano Saku pen name. The twitter thread has three mini-chapters that were released over the past few months.

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

Bound to You
pg 143 typeset is in grey color, error was fixed

fixed https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoMUg5Z1FxVnFnOEE

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 143 typeset is in grey color, almost readable, why is that?

fixed https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoMUg5Z1FxVnFnOEE

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

The Radiance of the Stars, error fixed

https://exhentai.org/s/03f525eaf4/1010157-17

pg 17, "That's probably I kept seeing you confessed to so many times..." ("That's probably why I kept...")
"And everytime I get really worried" should be "I got really worried"

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 17, "That's probably I kept seeing you confessed to so many times..." ("That's probably why I kept...")

"And everytime I get really worried" should be "I got really worried"

I fixed them and updated the exhentai version, but I'm unsure if it's possible to add an updated version here.
https://exhentai.org/s/03f525eaf4/1010157-17

fixed page

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

clearly the author read the LN and accepted how the story was going to end.

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 17, "That's probably I kept seeing you confessed to so many times..." ("That's probably why I kept...")

"And everytime I get really worried" should be "I got really worried"

last edited at Dec 26, 2016 1:56AM

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 13, Watanbe Satna
Santa

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ch 5, pg 14 "forver" (forever)

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
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errors on Belle of the Rabbit and Wolf, has been fixed on dynastyscan

Mistake on page 6 - "you're mother"
pg 17 "villiagers"

Yurikosmaller2
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I think the mistake on page 6 has been mentioned enough times for now

Cute story. I liked the wolf's style.

Mistake on page 6 - "you're mother"

Isn't it like transletors fault if they get it all wrong? xD not the author :>

That's totally not what they're saying but okay

As long as we're reporting typos:

pg 17 "villiagers"

yay, it been fixed

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joined May 28, 2011

https://yuriproject.net/riko-haru-irukawa-hot-springs-ch18/
pg 106, “could so pretty”
could be so pretty

EvilDevil
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Riko & Haru & Irukawa Hot Springs ch18
https://yuriproject.net/riko-haru-irukawa-hot-springs-ch18/
pg 106, “could so pretty”
could be so pretty

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

Nanashi no Asterism ch. 13
https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/12/each-jealous-of-other.html
typo pg 50 "agian" (again)

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yeah, error in pg 6

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http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/kobayashi_san_chi_no_maid_dragon_ch40#14

I wonder if I would suit it

what does she mean by this?

EvilDevil
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pg 05, "you've became" is "become".

EvilDevil
Opapagoto discussion 15 Dec 03:01
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

I think I found a mistake, pg 13 "considering how this school full of pretty girls..." should be "is full", missing "is".

pg 28, "eachother" needs a space.

Plus

Just small stuff, it happens, thanks for your time and work @translator.w

Ch 5 has an error, pg 205, "prgoram" should be "program", and pg 209 "laidies" should be "ladies". Terrible spelling.

Oh, sorry about that. I went thriugh the pages and I could've sworn that I caught all the typos,
but seeing how this happened twice, I guess I just don't have keen eyes for them.

Since you are very good at catching typos, would you like to QC my scans before I send them anywhere for upload?

Nah, it is not your eyes, I have my report after 3-4 revisions filled with worse typo. Everyone just need someone else to proof-check their work. That is normal

you can ask for qc at 4chan /u/, there is a translation thread. http://boards.4chan.org/u/thread/2196783

post your file there and ask for some revisions or suggestions. If you want me to help on qc, you can send me a pm at https://danbooru.donmai.us/users/352164

ch 6 has two minor errors, pg 16 "I wonder how that connected" it should be "how is that connected", missing "is". and pg 29 "aginst" is misspelled, should be "against".

EvilDevil
EvilDevil
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Nanashi no Asterism ch12 (v2)
https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/12/bring-forth-parties-of-suspicion.html
typo in pg 24 (somehting)