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Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 13, Watanbe Satna
Santa

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

ch 5, pg 14 "forver" (forever)

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

errors on Belle of the Rabbit and Wolf, has been fixed on dynastyscan

Mistake on page 6 - "you're mother"
pg 17 "villiagers"

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

I think the mistake on page 6 has been mentioned enough times for now

Cute story. I liked the wolf's style.

Mistake on page 6 - "you're mother"

Isn't it like transletors fault if they get it all wrong? xD not the author :>

That's totally not what they're saying but okay

As long as we're reporting typos:

pg 17 "villiagers"

yay, it been fixed

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

https://yuriproject.net/riko-haru-irukawa-hot-springs-ch18/
pg 106, “could so pretty”
could be so pretty

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Riko & Haru & Irukawa Hot Springs ch18
https://yuriproject.net/riko-haru-irukawa-hot-springs-ch18/
pg 106, “could so pretty”
could be so pretty

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Nanashi no Asterism ch. 13
https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/12/each-jealous-of-other.html
typo pg 50 "agian" (again)

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

yeah, error in pg 6

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/kobayashi_san_chi_no_maid_dragon_ch40#14

I wonder if I would suit it

what does she mean by this?

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 05, "you've became" is "become".

EvilDevil
Opapagoto discussion 15 Dec 03:01
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

I think I found a mistake, pg 13 "considering how this school full of pretty girls..." should be "is full", missing "is".

pg 28, "eachother" needs a space.

Plus

Just small stuff, it happens, thanks for your time and work @translator.w

Ch 5 has an error, pg 205, "prgoram" should be "program", and pg 209 "laidies" should be "ladies". Terrible spelling.

Oh, sorry about that. I went thriugh the pages and I could've sworn that I caught all the typos,
but seeing how this happened twice, I guess I just don't have keen eyes for them.

Since you are very good at catching typos, would you like to QC my scans before I send them anywhere for upload?

Nah, it is not your eyes, I have my report after 3-4 revisions filled with worse typo. Everyone just need someone else to proof-check their work. That is normal

you can ask for qc at 4chan /u/, there is a translation thread. http://boards.4chan.org/u/thread/2196783

post your file there and ask for some revisions or suggestions. If you want me to help on qc, you can send me a pm at https://danbooru.donmai.us/users/352164

ch 6 has two minor errors, pg 16 "I wonder how that connected" it should be "how is that connected", missing "is". and pg 29 "aginst" is misspelled, should be "against".

EvilDevil
EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Nanashi no Asterism ch12 (v2)
https://hachimitsu-scans.blogspot.kr/2016/12/bring-forth-parties-of-suspicion.html
typo in pg 24 (somehting)

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Can't watch the video... but I also thought of Aladdin during that scene!
http://www.mediafire.com/file/cnrt7f9zgtxtt1a/yuri+carpet+ride+to+mount+lesbo.rar

try this

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

"I grab it by the testes", I present to you the future Prime Minister of Japan.

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

found this on exhentai, not sure if it helps

For those confused: pages 6-9 are from the Doll girl's perspective, how she sees the dolls and how, atleast in her mind, they interract with her. While pages 10-14 are how the rest of the world sees it, the dolls as just dolls, not moving on their own. Are the dolled girls dead now or are they still aware and trapped inside their transformed bodies is a good question, but atleast to the Doll girl, they are and love being with her, as her play things.
The "friendship box" where the dolls are placed seems to be designed to make the two dolls kiss, reinforcing Doll girl's view that not only do her former friends like being dolls, but are becoming friends with each other.
Overall, quite a good cutesy story with a sudden dark flip. Though, I would've loved to see how she does the whole dollifying process.

EvilDevil
Dear discussion 09 Dec 22:19
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

and you are gay

I see no problem

EvilDevil
Opapagoto discussion 09 Dec 05:33
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

I think I found a mistake, pg 13 "considering how this school full of pretty girls..." should be "is full", missing "is".

pg 28, "eachother" needs a space.

Plus

Just small stuff, it happens, thanks for your time and work @translator.w

Ch 5 has an error, pg 205, "prgoram" should be "program", and pg 209 "laidies" should be "ladies". Terrible spelling.

Oh, sorry about that. I went thriugh the pages and I could've sworn that I caught all the typos,
but seeing how this happened twice, I guess I just don't have keen eyes for them.

Since you are very good at catching typos, would you like to QC my scans before I send them anywhere for upload?

Nah, it is not your eyes, I have my report after 3-4 revisions filled with worse typo. Everyone just need someone else to proof-check their work. That is normal

you can ask for qc at 4chan /u/, there is a translation thread. http://boards.4chan.org/u/thread/2196783

post your file there and ask for some revisions or suggestions. If you want me to help on qc, you can send me a pm at https://danbooru.donmai.us/users/352164

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

ch 5, pg 9, “this ones have a lot of padding” (is either “this one has” or “these ones have”, I think the former is correct)

EvilDevil
Opapagoto discussion 08 Dec 02:00
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

I think I found a mistake, pg 13 "considering how this school full of pretty girls..." should be "is full", missing "is".

pg 28, "eachother" needs a space.

Plus

Just small stuff, it happens, thanks for your time and work @translator.w

Ch 5 has an error, pg 205, "prgoram" should be "program", and pg 209 "laidies" should be "ladies". Terrible spelling.

last edited at Dec 8, 2016 2:06AM

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Mangagamer just announced that they're releasing Moekuri which appears to be a yuri-themed SRPG:

http://www.mangagamer.com/detail.php?goods_type=1&product_code=1005

http://store.steampowered.com/app/529160