I like the girls and all but when she said "Yes, I am a succubus" I almost wanted to drop it... The Doctor notices this right? you can't lie to her. I just really hate plots based on lies/misunderstandings. What's she's going to do when the real one shows up?
But I will use my golden rule for these cases, or my baseball rule of 3 strikes! I'll read 3 chapters and if I can't find 2 more flaws (Strikes) then it's safe to continue.
I didn't read it, and I'm not planning to, so I can't really say for sure whether they're appropriate, but with words like "cry for help" and "what the hell" and "terrible" thrown around in the comments above me, it sounds like the story needs some sort of tag besides "School girl" and "Yuri."
Those were exageratted comments. There wasn't much in this doujin beside "I'm afraid one of us will die someday". They just love each other so much that they don't want to think about the other disappearing, what is pretty normal.
The strangling part was weird, but the character herself said it so, and it wasn't really violent, so whatever.
Pretty much just cute yuri as always.
Fair enough. It still seems that there could be a tag for low-level weird stuff, since the initial reactions here did all seem to be a little concerned about it, but I guess the discussion here does an alright job of warning those who wouldn't be interested away.
id say it doesnt really do a good job, if i read this first i would think the story would be about someone who had given up on life, while in actuality its nothing like that. and i dont think there should be any such tags since the story is dealing with a rather natural subject
Are cat cafes really like that if so, where are they exactly?... QwQ
''A cat café is a theme café whose attraction is cats that can be watched and played with. Patrons pay a cover fee, generally hourly, and thus cat cafés can be seen as a form of supervised indoor pet rental.''
So one day they'll be separated and get hurt by the withdrawal? Withdrawal can kill after all
Don't you put that evil on me!
It's a bit of a precarious situation, basically if little miss vampire gets hurt little miss junior is screwed. But considering the symptom was prolly developed for survival purposes it shouldn't be immediately lethal if it is to be of any help