Btw, it's very unusual for a relatively short story like this one to get 20 pages of comments... it's good to see that, in this forum, quality is appreciated!
Appreciated!?!?
You didn't really bother reading those 20 pages of comments, did you?
I'm so jealous of Maki, she's, like, the luckiest chick in the world! (I'll shamelessly admit it: I was immersing myself in the story as Maki all along. Actually, that's probably the right way of reading it as the author intended, haha.)
Well, I do agree with you in that point: we, the readers, are obviously expected to identify with Maki - and vicariously enjoy the pleasure of being seduced and dominated and banged by a super cool beauty like Kaoru. I'm certain that's the way Japanese girls enjoy this sort of story.
It's rather funny that, in this here forum, most readers identify more with Kaoru...