The ending basically makes clear that they're going to end up together.

It's not that basic. Maybe you didn't realize that the dialog on last page are merely credit-page jokes.

Seems the last pages of "A World of Beautiful Women" are from "Our Relationship" and are duplicate. Need to get deleted I suppose.

P2: What? "Dynabook" on the laptop? Is that related with Dynasty Scans? :P
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P11: Not that! I should have given thoughts about that! HAHAHAHA!!

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Well still disagreed w/ that "optimistic ending" opinion. To me this is always a badly-told (or at least badly-terminated) tragic heart-broken story.

Hey I was wondering what if Madoka just ACTIVELY grabbed Raising Heart and stabbed into herself in ch1. Will that ever cause Nanoha a psychological trauma? Or only some cold-blooded "What a foolish / desperate girl. That has nothing to do with me."?

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Usami is surely an idiot. Since she knows so much about Mikadzuki's character of saying things opposite to her mind, why just doesn't take her "I hate you" as "I like you"? I'd ask "do you hate something" everytime instead if in her place.

Perhaps I know what this one is lacking of. It's an ending, in which everything gets a reasonable conclusion.
At first I thought Yamamoto Kiwa (the black-haired one) now still has an love to Saitou Ririko (the blonde one), which has lasted all the time from high-school graduation. But in the end, P27-28, "favor"? "capture you and won't let go"? What's that! What are you talking about! WTF am I reading! What happeded to the tragic mood suggested all the way from the beginning! You (the author/artist) merely wanted to draw some H scenes and never planned to tell a love story, don't you?
I won't recommend this one to any of my friends. Not only for the poor story but also the H scenes. They are eyesores.

Translations for Ex05-06:
05:
(Title: Let's stop going out)
F: Nanoha?
N: Well...
N: Let's stop going out.
06:
F: Is that so...
F: In the end, Nanoha you want to get married?
N: (Embarrassed) FATE!!!
F: Ahaha~

Have read Whisper (=SK, which I prefer to call so) twice (Chinese and English scanlations). But for SBF I only had a quick glimpse.
To me Whisper is basically a yuri comic with lots of funny stuff, and I didn't remember that in my quick glimpse of SBF. So if you are aiming to kill some time, I'd recommend Whisper.
BTW I also like Whisper for its somewhat modern and clean art style.

So there comes it. GJ.

Consider browsing the Incest tag for releases also tagged with age gap, and you'll probably find what you're looking for.

Well just did some browsing, here on Dynasty Reader you can only find 3 mom&daughter oneshots with "Incest" tag: Spring Blossoming, My Mother is a Witch and Medicine Rub. Don't know if there's others w/out the "Incest", though.

Wonder what the story will be like if Ai had her sis eventually turned in after slapping her.

Isn't P22 upside-down?

Oh yeah, patience, patience, always patience.
Perhaps I should tell you what's happening in the Chinese scanlating craft. Here a scanlation group could just stall a project without any reason (for example, lack of TL/edit/QC - the last of which usually literally does nothing or is completely absent - or no raw available), or the entire group dies silently. I, myself, as a reader, basically got fed up of those crap, so I was asking hoping that you guys won't let me down in similar ways. That's all.
Well since Michan said he/she was putting the final touches, I fell somewhat relieved.

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So we have that certain Legendary-Girl-A on P29 lowerleft, right?

Anyone thinks that we should have tags like "sisters" and "mom and daughter" besides a simple "incest"?

A bit unnecessary probably, due to there being next to no cases of the latter in yuri, possibly 2/3 on the reader total?

Why. The tag "Wrestling" applies to only 1 series and 1 oneshot, tag "Zombies" applies only to 2 series, and "Smell" applies only to 1 oneshot! So the lacking of applicated comics shouldn't be a reason for a tag to be nonexistent, nor not to create one such, I suppose.

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Awww. I feel like eating some chocolate now

Here, say ah~ (<- Stop right there you weirdo)

Anyone thinks that we should have tags like "sisters" and "mom and daughter" besides a simple "incest"?

Minor suggestion:
File 046, lower-right, the hair blower sfx "ゴ～" -> "roar" or "vroooom"? I think the former one is a bit scary for a household appliance - perhaps it ought to be broken to give such noise.

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Aww, I thought it was a native English fanbook. The heck w/ it.

File 10, middle-right, Arf's dialog: "bird meat" <- shouldn't it be "chicken"? The word "bird" and "chicken" spell the same in Japanese.

File Extra 07: Isn't it "9 years old" instead of "9 years ago" etc.? Or was it already written on the raw?

Woah on the first sight I thought it was Luka's headphone!

AHAHAHAHA!!! THAT LAST EXTRA PAGE (novel)!!! HAYATE YOU NAUGHTY!!!

Woah, here comes another great English scanlation.

One minor mistake, though: File 007: Middle, "ぐ～" -> growl~ (hungry sfx)

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