You know I was going to ignore this whole thing, but...

If you think that it is hard to translate 30 pages of manga, I have some breaking knew for you. (it's not) (and yes, I am talking from expirience)

You're full of shit.

Takemiya Chin 2 stronk

Why stop at two?

Hang on, Mikoko calls her by name! Like, the name she goes by, not "Ueno". I don't recall that happening before.

Oh god, I cracked the hell up at the credit page and Shimapanda's suffering at the metaphorical hands of comics with dicks.

whoever the other character was

You haven't seen Sketch? You poor, deprived individual.

Her wife has really lovely hair, though.

at most she might break an arm or get scratched up, but I doubt she'd die.

I wouldn't be so optimistic, myself.

If she were intending to jump (and walk away from it), I might agree. But even with the greenery (which may not even intercept her arc), physics is not on her side in a 10m fall and there's a high chance of death (or life-altering injuries that make you wish for death). Here's a useful document NASA put together that has a good chunk dedicated to impact acceleration tolerances: http://ntrs.nasa.gov/archive/nasa/casi.ntrs.nasa.gov/19930020462.pdf

Realistically, spinal injuries and internal bleeding are likely at half that height; and if she fractured the wrong vertebrae, she'd bleed out internally before they could even get her in an ambulance.

This is what preparedness looks like. Very shrewd, Mi-chan.

One thing that got to me though, did anyone find it excessive that Miu was just about to freaking jump off the school building?

Did anyone not find it excessive? Is it even possible? That's the sort of thing that gets you sent to the loony bin.

Why is Nozomi so perfect.

Cancel the photographer, make some red bean rice.

Glorious credit page.

As soon as I saw the author, I realised I was going to have to stay up past my bedtime again, because there's no way I can pass up some delicious Bomber Grape.

Ahahaha, all those speed lines at the end. Does Ran know marital arts?

Considering her treatment of Keiko this chapter, I'm inclined to say yes. She's got the "angry wife" thing down.

This was intriguing and kind of down-to-earth for a first chapter, and there are a lot of places it could go. It's a pity all the discussion is black bars.

I like Kureha. She's got pluck and heart.

...but she also has terrible form. You're going to break your shoulder shooting like that, girl!

Well . . . not with a laser rifle, she isn't.

If she was using a real firearm before, it doesn't show. Placing the butt of the gun firmly against your shoulder isn't something you forget to do (especially if you've ever failed to do it). And it's kind of a miracle that she hits anything at all, with sighting like that!

It's interesting to see that Morishima apparently isn't used to drawing hands like that at all. Look at Kureha's fingers on the forestock.

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Aya's red tights are delicious. And Karaagetarou has improved tremendously. Art-wise, I think it really shows in his lines and the way he conveys motion.

I like Kureha. She's got pluck and heart.

...but she also has terrible form. You're going to break your shoulder shooting like that, girl!

it's based off a legit novel, not like a manga or LN

Oh, so that's why it has a title I can say in the span of a single breath and a premise that isn't completely embarrassing.

Those bearrows are too cute.

Ahh yuri 3Ps, is there anything greater on this planet?

Does the greatness increase linearly as you add more people?

So did they skip dating and go directly to marriage or something?

The credits page was what finally got me to lose it.

fucking spent three actual hours on this post about a twenty page h-doujin, I hate myself so much

It's okay, I like you for it. Very good analysis.

Man, that guy is a toolchest. I don't care how long they've known each other, that kind of coercive behaviour is bullshit.

Interesting, I wasn't expecting the upperclassman to be the one to take the initiative like that. It's clever how this sets itself up on the expectation of the "I think I might like this cool older girl" cliche and then thoroughly subverts it.