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2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

As always, thanks so much for the translation, halmoni. Oh, and having the links in here is great, too.

Phil
Stretch discussion 02 Apr 05:27
2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

So that's when that picture was taken!

10/10 chapter!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

There goes the honokotoumi fluff.

Can't wait for the next one, thanks for the translation!

e: oh, what was Umi about to say on page 6? "I'm not as-"?

last edited at Apr 2, 2015 7:20AM

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Great MeSaku slice of life. And... legs! \o/

last edited at Apr 1, 2015 4:29PM

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Great news!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

I love the Massa x Meru relationship and while I would have liked to see Asuna and Fuu get back together, I think it is probably better to leave it as it is. Fuu didn't tell her that she never wanted to talk to her, she obviously is still attracted to her and paying attention to her to a certain extent, and it is clear as day that Asuna still loves Fuu a ton. It is very typical that Fuu told her that she can contact her, but not to expect her to initiate contact. After all, that is just too much bother... The fact that it leaves some hope for them to be happy together is nice.

I think the Asuna and Fue story ended in the intermission and with Fue's internal monologue in which she says there is no hope for their relationship right now but she didn't know about the far future. So I think there is some hope of them reconciling or meeting half-way. After all, we are three+ years down the road since their breakup.

Although I'm not sure about Sachi-Ruki, I figure that Ruki is, as baffling as might come, genuinely happy and Sachi really loves her. At least both are looking forward to their future together (and look at the gesture of Ruki folding her umbrella and getting under Sachi's - all the small details in the latter chapters are really neat).

Some of the vagueness in the storytelling made me feel uneasy. Maybe Sachi's "Yeah, I guess" is supposed to be interpreted as teasing or at least her not immediately making an appointment to have some extra fun and is actually meant to show that she is no longer oblivious to Ruki's feelings. Or if it's still a lopsided relationship, then i would have liked to read some commentary on that in the afterword. If it's just "she's a wimp now" and it's played for laughs, I find that to be a problematic message. Right now I just can't tell, which is the most unsatifying for me as a reader. Right now I can't help but feel I didn't get everything, same goes for Ruki being prideful. I think what she tried to do and failed at was just her trying to be competent, one of the basic motivations of human beings (others being striving for autonomy and relatedness).

Also, the Meru Maasa Remi triangle at the end confused me. Remi seems moved by Meeru's caring for her but there is a lot of ambiguity as to what she thinks of Maasa. Before reading the extra, I pegged Remi as being unable to love, but now I think that might actually being Maasa's plight. She only allows herself to use people. Meru is her secretary investment and somehow she also took interest in Remi's skills (I guess those are making things complicated and grade A scheming). Having read the story, I have no idea what we are to expect to develop from that. I expect Remi to create a lot of problems and the only answer to Maasa being okay with that would be that she likes Remi (something I never picked up vibes for).

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2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

After reading the recent Ooshima Tomo NicoMaki doujin released on Yuri-ism, I immediately had the thought that I wanted to see something with the moms (since Maki's and Nico's moms were so hot in it)

I browsed their reader but couldn't find one with the mamas in it. Anybody know the name of the doujin?

Nvm: I think you were talking about Offering A Poem of Love to the Upside Down Sun. I had forgotten about the flashbacks.

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Phil
BiBi x Pink discussion 31 Mar 06:54
2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Maki is wearing a ring on her pinky in her first panel, which disappears after that. I wonder why she is still not married. Are you waiting for your bright pink colour to come around, Maki-chan? You also seemed to put a lot of thought in your preparations for your next date.

I'm really looking forward to more from this author. While the art is rough and cursory in parts, the way he or she draws lips and eyes really has grown on me. Especially looking forward to his comic about Maki's belief in Santa.

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2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Oh, thanks for clearing that up. i totally didn't pick up in that.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

@ All the Other Members that Commented and Debated

I just wanted to say a big thanks to everyone. Despite my total dislike of the story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and taking part in the debate that erupted around the story. I'm positive that our heated discussion would make Amano squeal with glee at our blood, sweat, and tears shed over her story. Again, thanks to everyone ...

Yes, thanks everybody. It was fun! Although it sure was tense sometimes.

All in all this work is well-narrated and really kept me on the edge of my seat. I thought I was beginning to dislike it, but I its high quality wins me over in the end. Some things didn't seem necessary, the whole deadly sins jazz but reading the author's thoughts I figure it was just a vague idea she never meant to flesh out.

Two things I found confusing in the extra and afterword (being confused always takes away enjoyment):
Maybe it was mentioned before, but I feel that I was just expected to swallow that Remi's family is rich too and runs a company which just conveniently happens to be somewhat useful to Maasa's clothing company, so Maasa has a reason to keep in touch with Remi, laying the foundation for future drama? sigh

But seing a dazzled Remi was nice. Is that supposed to be a Remi Meru Maasa triangle?

And who is going to study abroad? Remi, Maasa and Meru have jobs, Asuna is starting as a teach, Fueko is going to be a NEET, which leaves Sachi and Ruki but I don't see why a kindergarten teacher needs to go abroad and Ruki would never leave Sachi's side (because she's scared).

Coincidentally, right now I'm on my way to my own graduation day. Master GET! \o/

last edited at Mar 30, 2015 4:24AM

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Art is dashing. I'm in it for the long haul. <o

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

They should definitely buy another mirror for their bedroom.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Here's to hoping they don't do a botch job on the final episode. Wishful Thinking

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Alien from the Darkness? Wow, those were the VHS-days.

Phil
2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

;_;

Phil
Image Comments 23 Mar 01:39
2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014
Flagship%20duet

Being oblivious can be considered a crime, too, Akagi-san!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

I don't think he is around anymore. I think I read a comment saying he'd go on a break due to personal issues back in 2009.

Phil
2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

This was adorable and I immensely enjoyed how much feeling was conveyed with very little.

Oh, and Erena is a pervert!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Wow, this brings back memories. Too bad there is no Tsukihime anime.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Thanks for the new translation, halmoni!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Teary-eyed Nico looking back at Maki is so moe.

Thanks for the release, guys!

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

Well, the teacher had no ring so she maybe should have taken the plunge.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

I've had this one on my to read-list and the first pages of today's chapter finally piqued my interest enough so I decided I'd better read everything. Can't say I was disappointed. The art and the complexity of the setting were really enjoyable to me.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

This was very relevant to my interests.

2x2-shinobuden-m001
joined Dec 14, 2014

I'm trying to be patient and wait for it to be uploaded on Dynasty, but I really want to know what happens next. :x Where is everybody reading this?

We're just /u/sing our imagination.

Basically, check halmoni's post on this page.

last edited at Feb 23, 2015 4:45PM