This manga would have been amazing if it was Rin and Mayuki. I didnt like Akira tbh she was like Forced to accept this relationship otherwise there won't be any other way to be with rin. Akira never apologized for what she said to mayuki and if you see the panels she was doing lips contact with mayuki instead of kissing her. The kiss between akira and mayuki is so different from the one with rin-akira. But anyway
For me it was a pretty descent ending. There was no drama after they discover sayako and ayumi were cheating on them. True Sayako x Ayumi fits better but it's ok. I see they are ok to do a 4some which is
For me looked like a yuri manga idk. Like she was in love with her aunt like she wanted to run away with her since she is being forced to get married she doesnt love in a romantic way. But yea, in japan arranged marriage was too common, I think nowadays some families arrange marriages tho idk how common it is now.
Kinda sad story. Sure her friend never noticed waka's feelings. The reason why waka feels like is too late now is due to the fact that she doesnt want to cause problems to her. Sure the message is that the cigarettes represents the feelings waka has for her friends, and those feelings are the one who are gonna make her sick and d34th.
I could feel it when she said she had a night with her boyfriend... bruh
I wish there was a second part so waka can find someone else who can help her out to free those feelings tho sadly that will never happen
.... Did they brake up or no? Do they love each other? I mean Tora might like her but I couldnt understand shiratori. One more page was needed to clarify
I'm torn. Hate the art, love the story, but it's way too rushed. I'm sure there's some sort of understanding with certain types of stories that the reader with be able to fill in the "due to certain circumstances" on their own and just go straight into the sex/foot massaging/oil lapping ... erm ... whatever that was. My preference is to see the backstory, so this sort of story that teases at potential kind of annoys me.
Maybe it's because I write romance for a living; I want to see what someone /else/ came up with once in a while. With stories like this, I'll spend the next two days writing the pre/post story in my head. That's probably 'working as intended' but I can't help feeling cheated lol
I would read more by this artist/author. Good pacing, given the brevity, enough setting to keep it from being a jump-in-bed story, still hate the art.
I shouldn't read these within three hours of my writing critique group, huh.
Edit: I also don't get the name. I expected the rich girl to be the sub for some reason. Oh well.
The art its ok, its the artist's art style. It isnt rushed, you can't wait a long detailed story in a one shot bruh. Next time read the tag kid. Or draw yours instead and show how a proper manga should be
The meaning at the end is simple, she just broke her promise cause she said her girlfriend was never gonna feel lonely but at the end she did it(unconsciously maybe) that's why she was looking at the fireworks with the same feelings from before
It wasnt a waste of money. She knew the money she had was dirty money. All she wanted from now on was to go ahead and focus in the present, the meaning of throwing all that money is that she was leaving all her mistakes in the past. I dont like this kinda of manga where they sell to ugly bastards but at least it has a happy ending
I bet the astarotte girl from before is gonna be the third wheel here. I'm seeing her being transferred to marika's school and being clingy to her since she knows where marika was before. Somehow I feel like Aya had a lover before but their relation didnt work out. I hope there won't be drama here
