I tried to read it more carefully with a clear head now, the first chapter's pace(Maybe, I don't know how exactly say it) is simply fucked because it tries too hard to establish the world, the main character, the job, the client, the concept of rape all into a single chapter and do so with abornormal amount of words, even if some panels were definitely used as a joke, It's like it was 3 chapters crammed into 1, even trought it's 40 pages long.
Interesting idea behind but the pace (and amount of writing) needs to be improved.
last edited at Jun 1, 2021 11:11AM