I love ponytails and now my nose is bleeding.

Shia Labeouf time. Inhales Don't let your dreams be dreams! JUST DO IT (HER), YVONNE!

Also, Sepheron? Mage & Demon Queen crossover?

Makino: "Guess I'll die."

"Don't mind me, just pushing a child out." - the author, for real.

This is missing the secret extra chapter where Resine wakes up from her nightmare about Simone dying and is then comforted by Simone, who is lying in bed next to her.

This chapter totally exists and I definitely did not make this up.

"Let the heroine get wet by the rain."

I can think of at least two ways to fulfill this task. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

There are a lot of series that when I see the new chapter uploaded, I immediately click and read it. This isn't one of them. No, for this, whenever it's that time of week, I'm refreshing the page every hour or so in anticipation.

I do understand the questions around why Yvonne seems to be suddenly forgetting the omniscient presence that forced her into this situation to begin with, but it can't all be handled in one chapter. Elsa seemed a bit more reserved in this chapter (despite actually kissing Yvonne, I know) due to what just happened, and Yvonne is just generally having a lot of internal struggles.

When the switch flips.

Well, as the old saying goes...

That escalated quickly.

Why is everyone calling Yvonne stupid/an idiot? This system has forced her to do awful things, and the one time she refused it destroyed her entire family (when it prompted her to basically kill Elsa, no less). Then here, in a pivotal moment, it flashed a ton of literal warning signs. She has no idea what that could mean (and neither do we). I'd be scared shitless, too.

Yeah, that's right, reject being the villain to the heroine, be the villain to the system!

Yeah this (ch 18, at least) is starting to feel like it's getting into abusive behavior territory. I really can't support Hiyama as she's acting currently.

"But the villainess will never be a love interest option."

Rae Taylor: Laughs

Also I feel like there might be something that doesn't make a whole lot of sense about Garth being a mega yuri fan in this otome game world but I'm just gonna choose not to think about it that much because I like it.

Come on, author, you ain't fooling anyone, we all know where this is going.

Lol, about halfway through the chapter I was thinking this could be a good thing because this guy might be the one who can finally get it through Yvonne's thick skull that Elsa likes her. Didn't think my suspicions would be confirmed so fast, though!

I love a horny lesbian but Kaede is kinda...dull here compared to the anime. In the anime it was amusing because she's initially set up to be a rival character competing with Riri to impress Yuyu, but then the first episode hasn't even ended yet and she's already flipped around to being in love with Riri instead. Here it's just...love at first sight. A boring trope even if it's yuri.

Hell yeah, gimme that good restaurant yuri.

I didn't even know about this Renta site until the credits page here, and I gotta say, the official English title for this series, "Mr. Right Turned Out To Be A Younger Woman!?" is pretty awesome.

Elsa said "to make up for yesterday" like whatever happened was her fault. The way the writing is otherwise heavily implying that Yvonne attacked her without actually confirming she did makes me think it didn't happen.

I don’t know, the bandage had to come from somewhere. Its never happened before that Yvonne did anything without at least telling Elsa to prepare, like simply asking Elsa to not go pee instead of restraining her. So I can't imagine a world where Yvonne just jumps Elsa without saying anything, but that seems to be what this is implying.

Well yeah, that's what I'm saying. It's being strongly implied that Yvonne attacked her, but it stops short of confirming that she did. When that happens in fiction, it usually means that what's being implied did not actually happen. Elsa would have gotten injured in some other way.

Elsa said "to make up for yesterday" like whatever happened was her fault. The way the writing is otherwise heavily implying that Yvonne attacked her without actually confirming she did makes me think it didn't happen.

"It's mutual? Awesome, let's fuck."

Great to see a character know what she wants and go for it!

I look forward to seeing these two best friends continue to be best friends in the most best friendsy way possible.

"Give me money!"
"Okay..."

Damn, if those kinds of grades could've gotten me that kind of money so easily from my parents I would have actually tried in school. But noooo, my parents had to believe in doing well in school "fOr MYseLf." Which of course resulted in me not doing shit.

I'm always up for some darker yuri, so long as that darkness gets properly acknowledged.

That escalated quickly.