Cute! I wish Homura showed more reciprocation but this was still cute!

From the author's note: "I wonder if MadoHomu will get a happy end [in the movie]....!?"

Oh...oh dear.

[Possible Spoilers ahead]
I couldn't remember when Rebellion came out so I was like, "How does this fit in with the story with Kyubey being around? Is Homura creating this fake world and is Kyubey trying to sneak into it and destroy it?"

When I read that author note and found out that this came out before Rebellion, I actually said, "Oh my god!" out loud.

This was an adorable doujin but some of the fanservicey parts were annoying given their age. I know the author tried their best to make it appropriate, but did we really need the closeups of Madoka rubbing sunscreen on Homura?

So cute!

My interpretation is that the bully needs to hide her love for her victim by bullying her. Part of me thinks, 'Aww... they love each other,' but another part of me thinks 'Holy crap, there's no excuse! Bullying someone is not a sign of your "ardent love"; it's abuse.' I don't know what to think. It would have been nice if there was a conclusion when the bully turned around and stood up for her girlfriend.