the story was all over the place there were no focus on anything at all so i can not relate to any of the characters or her problems so much stuff happen in a few pages the writting was so poor in general there was no character development at all like the author previous work now loading where the story build up to nothing so when the end arrives you feel like the author leave the stoy incomplete feels like so much stuff is happening yet the relationship is going nowhere like if you were wasting your time it s like if golden time end at the fifth episode just getting the couple together without developing their relationship