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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

le sexy nose blood has arrived

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

top ten things that make you acutely aware of how long you've been single

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Image Comments 13 Jul 20:11
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
Grosss

Yeah she's an elegant and composed lady most of the time, but she's an idol fanatic lol. She goes absolutely nuts about them.

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Image Comments 13 Jul 03:53
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
E1g2gxquyaefmrf-orig

They're gonna buy her an expensive graphics card

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

When you think it's a joke with the gals but then you look up and see her face lookin' like a glazed donut

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

If you're not sucking her soul out her mouth with your mouth are you even really friends?

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Image Comments 12 Jul 21:16
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
E3vps2cvgaecorw-orig

The wife/pet choice she offers really be hitting hard right about now

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Kill Switch discussion 12 Jul 08:26
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

I actually really like this story. So far it seems like semi-adults with Issues figuring out there shit, so the drama doesn’t feel too forced. There’s an edge to all the characters, and I love it.

Also. Soooo many kinds of hot masculine women. Holy shit. They’re all so attractive.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

I love how you can tell the author just by the title

Also, god damn. Especially the beginning of the mat play scene.

last edited at Jul 12, 2021 7:42AM

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Image Comments 12 Jul 00:10
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
Pngkwci

^This is not the same Morgan that Yorukun draws. That's the Morgan from Proper Human History Alt history stuff, this one is from a Lostbelt.

last edited at Jul 12, 2021 12:11AM

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Page 9 was quite nice.

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School Zone discussion 11 Jul 16:44
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Why do i feel like Hiragi gonna end up being the nice twin and Tsubaki being an asshole xd

...Yeah... this whole chapter felt vaguely threatening.

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

That chocolate scene was actually really hot. I didn't expect that.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Okay, so it looks like MC-chan wasn't actually just playing everyone all along--she has a time-traveling, reality-hopping yandere version of herself that is going around and seemingly puppeting her body at key moments and making her forget, leaving behind only a sense of deja vu and her feelings of love for Menou-chan. Who also seems to be a total asshole to other people. Those ribbons were really important to Momo.

So she has a time ghost yandere doppleganger whose influence is making her fall in love with Menou-chan. I'm re-sold, I take it all back again. I love this now.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

I recant, there was precedent for the yandere twist scattered throughout. Disadvantages of reading one chapter a month. I'll withhold more judgement until we can see more of the story.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

That's amateur fanfic-level writing, at best, and lazy delaying tactic, at worst.

Yeah I'm really starting to get that feeling here. The first few chapters of this were really good, setting up an interesting twist with the male isekai protag-kun getting merc'd and then the kind of heartbreaking dynamic between the two main heroines. It had all it needed to be a powerful, emotional story with just those few details--the innocent girl who perfectly trusts her savior, and the tortured girl with conflicted morals who has to look at her smile and know what she's doing. It's a really strong setup, and was a really interesting take on isekai genre stuff.

But as things have gone on... the pacing has gone completely out of whack, and like Koveras said it's being handled in a very amateurish way. It feels like the author is throwing in new details, powers, or characters for every fight and just putting in the stuff they came up with that they thought was cool, rather than slowly giving us more insight into the mysterious and intriguing power system they'd already set up, with the result that we don't know the stakes or power levels and it feels a little like the author is just telling us about these cool ideas they thought up rather than designing the story for readers. And I see the same thing happening here with plot details, too.

It really feels very undisciplined or insecure, like the author didn't believe in the power of the story they were telling and decided to add Plot and Things Happening. I'll keep reading, and I'd love to see myself proven wrong, but this is shaping up to not be the quality of story I had thought it to be.

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

For some reason I'm not satisfied...but eh at least they're happy now (?)

Yeah this kind of stuff is my jam but somehow I'm just... not really feeling it. This chapter, and the arc in general, didn't really dig into my heart so that I could follow along with everything that happened, you know? It felt like I just sort of... watched it, I guess.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Wait, there was an extra chapter about her first wet dream?

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/that_time_i_was_blackmailed_by_the_classs_green_tea_bitch_ch02#7
Lmao it was about LXL

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Image Comments 09 Jul 23:13
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
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This artist just keeps delivering wins.

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Image Comments 09 Jul 21:18
Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018
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lmao

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Okay, yeah, I'm 1000% down for this. The story is really interesting, and our MC pulling the whole, "Alluring onee-sama who will induct you into a brand-new world" thing on her Senpai is really hot. Subscribed.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

When she had her hands on her "friend's" legs, my gay-ass hindbrain was expecting her to shove them apart all of a sudden. That would've ruined me.

last edited at Jul 9, 2021 4:36PM

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Those lesbian prostitution yuri stories are way too good, really.

Prostitution is making an ever-greater case for itself to be added to my list of tags that indicate bangers.

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Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

Lowkey kinda hot chapter... seeing our dumbass MC accidentally about-face into an aggressive and confident ladykiller and then totally turn the tables on the tsundere was some A-tier content.

Also loving the Phoenix Wright reference.

Kiarabg
joined Sep 6, 2018

"can you give me blowjob? no homo"

just gals bein' bros