I appreciate this version, but I'm glad we're taking a much slower pace in the serialized version
Yeah. Some details have certainly changed but mostly it's that she's had the chance at a second pass, to flesh out the qualities she wants to focus on and develop things that the twitter version only mentioned or could only speed past.
The major events aren't changing that much but the relationships, motivations and characterizations are given more space to breathe and become clearer. The romance, for example, was there in the twitter draft but with the space limits, she had less real estate to focus on that while also balancing the plot. Now she can flesh out both. Twitter manga just had to go at a relatively breakneck pace because of the medium.
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