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luinthoron
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joined Dec 20, 2018

This story has a very interesting premise, but the moment the Prez’s sister decided to check on the Pervert, I could see right where this chapter was going, and predictable stories are a huge turn off to me, at this point I believe we’ve seen enough from both MCs, and we needed a little more of the “Prez” because I can’t understand what MC sees on her, but I guess that’s that, fleshing out other characters is not allowed.

It's a bit early in the story, I think, but I agree that the Prez needs some development. Both to show why the MC likes her so much, and to show off who she is as a character, disconnected from fantasies.

Hard to call chapter 5 of 9 early.

luinthoron
Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Cute.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Place your bets folks, are their confessions gonna get interrupted by something?

Assuming that's even the plan.

luinthoron
Image Comments 04 May 06:25
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Nice. :D

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Image Comments 04 May 06:25
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Cute.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:24
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Busted. :D

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Image Comments 04 May 06:24
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Cute.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:23
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Nice. :D

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Image Comments 04 May 06:22
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Delicious.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:21
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Nice.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:21
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Hex Maniac sure has become big. But still cute.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:20
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Cute.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:20
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Lovely.

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Image Comments 04 May 06:19
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Clever indeed.

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Image Comments 03 May 12:15
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Mindbreak successful.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Cute.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Cute.

luinthoron
SHY discussion 01 May 06:00
Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Yeah, i wondering who this tall woman who look like Shy and was the previous Japan Hero. God, that is probably the least subtle implication i've seen in some time. Also 73 chapters to know that there was a precedent Japan Hero and know that raise some questions. How did they change Hero in countries ? How they're even choose ? Was Shy ignorant of who was the previous Japan Hero ? If it's really her mom (which is very possible given the hint), since when Japan don't have an Hero ?

At this point, I'm not ruling out that this was a time traveling Shy.

luinthoron
Image Comments 01 May 05:54
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Cute.

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Image Comments 01 May 05:54
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Can't stop laughing... :D

Meanwhile, Chiyo and Akari are just looking at this and going yeah, that happens...

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Image Comments 01 May 05:50
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Cute.

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Image Comments 01 May 05:50
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Very nice.

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Image Comments 01 May 05:50
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Cute.

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Image Comments 01 May 05:49
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Sure, friends... :D

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Image Comments 01 May 05:46
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Nice.