I really, really REALLY enjoyed reading this. Very good writting and cute. It was really long, but it didn't get boring. I'll keep and eye out for this author's future works.

The autor has a webtoon for this one shot but it's on the discover section waiting to be featured https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/not-so-shoujo-love-story/list?title_no=178073

I know! It´s so freaking goooooooood!

I know this is slightly out of topic, but back in the 3rd chapter... Why did the love potion didn't work on Goe-chan?

The best reaction to a reverse trap I've ever seen.

I like this pairing, but nobody is going to talk about that infamous (amazing) indirect kiss attempt by Mahiru? When I first saw that I kind of gasped. That crossed the subtext territory into full one sided yuri crush. At least on Miharu´s part.

I´m really sarting to hate Shion now...

Fuck, that´s why I love seeing rapist characters being slaughtered...

Test what? What is that thing at the end?

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^^ Well, I can´t never see this picture the same way again...

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Please, author; Please. Make this into a series... You have a goldmine in hands. Be wise and serialize this!

Man... I love black haired badass gay girls... Reimu hits all my yay buttons.

She can´t die.... She can´t fucking die! Oh, my God! Get the flamethrower!

I hate this comedy romance stories that exagerates on the ecchi. I think is only a meek distraction from how poorly written is the stroryline and plots.

That said... That´s why I love this parody so much. I wouldn´t mind seeing more of this story. It makes fun of all the cliches that cringe me so much.

This artist is amazing! And when you check this guy out, you realized is the same dude who did Kemono Friends... What a gap.

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What the hell was that bonus image? Attack on Gyaru Lesbian?

Huh? I didn´t get it...

Being Brazilian has it's good points sometimes. I already up to chapter 07 at Mangadex... Liking It a lot so far.

Oh, my God, guys. It´s a prelude. It´s before they start dating! We gonna know how they fell in love! How it all begun! Buckle up! We are going for a ride here!

a massive scarlet flag.

FTFY.

You are a genius

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Smiling kiddo is a huge red flag..... Actually, this entire manga is a massive crimson flag.

Yep..... Still cringy....

@Entoma Er... I didn´t. It was Elevown....

Er, guys.... I really don´t know what to think about this....

I wanna punch those guys. Who else wanna punch those fuckers?

The faces are weird again...

u proly have weirder face noob

wtf is with the elementary school insults?

Save it for your comedy tour.

Actually that one made me chuckle a little. I felt like getting insulted by D.Va from Overwatch.