I dont recall Lum being that buff lol. Though its been SO long since I saw it thats about all I DO remember.

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I just can't take this "art" style seriously. May as well draw stick figures.

Very 'simple' art styles can still be used to tell very powerful and moving stories

https://dynasty-scans.com/images/1691

^There's probably no right way since its slang :) And Im always happy to see more nicomaki!

^Could be one of Mochi's disciples?

p7 Is that really how you write peek-see its a combo of peeking and to see? I thought it was peeksy or peeksie maybe - just a cute way to write peek- like cutesy is to cute?

^^Well it was done very well here I thought :)

That was fun lol :)

^Thanks :) I thought the art looked super similar!

Nice- the art is very close to that in the 3 faries series- made it seem like a bonus chapter of them.

edit - hold on- this doujin says on page 1 its by Hirasaka Makoto/Clash house, the artist of the 3 faries stuff- not strangechameleon - has it been misattributed?

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So next chapter we find out how Ruby took the reveal..

P.s She looks super sexy in that credit page image with that shy pose!

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Something I just noticed from page 00 - the younger sister is totally gonna be the top and taking the lead isnt she lol.

... Isn't Shiori strangely calm? You'd think she'd have jumped at Saori's confession from the previous chapter screaming "YES! YES! I ACCEPT!", right? Taking it so casually both in ch23 and this one had made me suspected that there was still a possibility that she misunderstood it as something not remotely romantic.

I doubt it- they kissed and made it clear they meant as lovers and it was what her sister wanted. I think she is just kinda so taken by suprise it hasnt fully hit her- and also, she is very shy compared to the younger sister. I think it would have been totally out of character for her to act like that.

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^^Well- I guess that makes sense- you could stick a 1 on a stand alone tank still I guess..but kinda unlikely.. unless they could have just been 'hopefull' of more. Hope you are right.

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@Goggled Anon If they just released all this as vol1- this last chapter being the last chapter of that volume- how do you know that wasnt the end? Is there already another chapter or more out beyond 24?

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@Quisty Isnt that just all the other works by this same artist? Dont really recall any by someone else that look like these do. Personally I love the palette- it perfectly suits the art style.

@Exhausted I'd noticed lol. They are like half way down to the stomach not on their chests. Just try to not focus on them too much lol.

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@ Kayriss “Mutually Requited Sisters" will be the follow on series that is just them having sex, kissing, and hand holding all the time.

Anything interesting in there?

Yay lol :) I was sure they'd dodge it again. Very happy!

I have to correct her on that last thought tho- you didnt stop being sisters just because you became lovers girl!

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^Not sure if the release date is for the date the chapter came out or the day the translated version did- it might be new- its not like artists cant have different styles for different things.

Harsh!

Would a little cheek kiss or something have hurt lol?

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^Sure sounds it lol. Either way there are lots of options for continuing the series, and I hope the author uses one of them!

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^That works too :) It wouldnt suprise me if they'd had to sign contracts - and they could have yuri dating be a loophole in it lol- like the contracts wording is 'no fraternising with boys' or similar.

^That would be best case senario :) I've seen it done a few times too so it's not unheard of!

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P.s loved this chapter :) I hope the reveal means moving onto a new phase rather than it about to end though!

It's told us if magical girls fall in love they loose their powers..

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Also why is there a "Communism" tag in Chapter 22 am I not getting something

@Kalin- Lol ok, I guess you didnt notice some of the fine details in the first few pages- that sentai group are totally communist themed.

The red one is called MARX red- (i.e Karl Marx) he has the communist STAR and the HAMMER and SICKLE on his outfit - the blue one has ANTI IMPERIALIST on his helmet, and lastly the group is called REVOLUTION Guevaranger!

i.e the peoples revolution, and GUEVARAnger is a 'Che Guevara' referance.

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