pg 3, "wierd" should be "weird"

few errors were fixed

Memories POPS (Mai-Hime)
https://exhentai.org/g/1083134/329904e38f/

there is an error in pg 08, "you know, if you that much" should be "if you eat that much"
pg 16, "lunch breeak" should be "lunch break"

Nurse DMJii
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w2qqXoSSR-g

Miku-Chris cooking
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XfQklJiQTB0

Elfnein-Carol karaoke
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MrwX-Cy23Go

Hibiki-Chris pocky
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TWLByt4X2IU

Sakimori cooking
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o99ATfhxRIA

Elfnein-Shirabe ice cream
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lr5d41Xe87M

Maria-Chris yoga
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P1nwzWq4fVg

Maria-Tsubasa shogi
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmPTHNVy8ss

pg 10, "what's else..." I think it should be "what else..."

some errors

pg 10, "That was no need for that!" should be "There was no need for that!"
pg 20, "We won't be able to be friend any more." should be "friends"
pg 25, "I don't have right" should be "I don't have a right"
pg 26, "haveing" should be "having"
pg 34, "I just can't seem take my eyes" should be "to take my eyes"

Someone wrote an indonesian yuri novel

The novel is about a boy, a girl, and another girl who like the first girl in a semi-fantasy story, a typical setting for a harem series. Except, instead of focusing on the boy x girl relationship, I make the second girl let go of the first girl and started her own harem and have her own adventure (though still complementing the boy's and first girl's adventure). In the end, the yuri take up 2/3 of the whole story instead of 50/50 like I originally planned

sample ch 1:

http://g-c-t.weebly.com/power-play---key--lancer.html

Bloom Into You ch 23 pg 18 error was fixed http://www.mediafire.com/file/cucc1to70r1w0q6/%5B4s%5D_Yagate_Kimi_ni_Naru_-_23.zip

TL is out: http://www.mediafire.com/file/cucc1to70r1w0q6/%5B4s%5D_Yagate_Kimi_ni_Naru_-_23.zip

Just gonna comment on the last scene with the texting. There's something incredibly sweet about how genuinely happy Touko is after receiving Yuu's text first. We all had a discussion on whether Touko truly loves Yuu and I think we can see it here that there is some genuineness in her feelings. Touko's hesitation to text Yuu for comfort reflects that there's still a gap in the trust department due to her insecurity & vulnerability (whether she can rely on Yuu w/o her coming to hate her). Yuu texting first actually reassures Touko & gives her the confidence needed to send her own text. From this, I think maybe Yuu starting to initiate more in showing her love & care (in little acts like hand holding or sthg, not stuffs like kissing or confessing) will be key to fill up the little trust gap in Touko & help her slowly becoming more accepting of her feelings.

small error

ch 23, pg 18, "The part of your sister you that you knew"

should be "The part of your sister that you knew"

error has been fixed http://www.mediafire.com/file/cucc1to70r1w0q6/%5B4s%5D_Yagate_Kimi_ni_Naru_-_23.zip

TL is out: http://www.mediafire.com/file/cucc1to70r1w0q6/%5B4s%5D_Yagate_Kimi_ni_Naru_-_23.zip

Just gonna comment on the last scene with the texting. There's something incredibly sweet about how genuinely happy Touko is after receiving Yuu's text first. We all had a discussion on whether Touko truly loves Yuu and I think we can see it here that there is some genuineness in her feelings. Touko's hesitation to text Yuu for comfort reflects that there's still a gap in the trust department due to her insecurity & vulnerability (whether she can rely on Yuu w/o her coming to hate her). Yuu texting first actually reassures Touko & gives her the confidence needed to send her own text. From this, I think maybe Yuu starting to initiate more in showing her love & care (in little acts like hand holding or sthg, not stuffs like kissing or confessing) will be key to fill up the little trust gap in Touko & help her slowly becoming more accepting of her feelings.

small error

ch 23, pg 18, "The part of your sister you that you knew"

should be "The part of your sister that you knew"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kmjEUhQudCk

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1C-wisDTo_Y

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fLMyeCDrokk

Do like Cinderella, each sister should kiss the young one until the right one is found.

https://www.reddit.com/r/KemonoFriends/comments/6jjp7o/we_are_streaming_the_kemono_friends_stage_play/

pg 62, "Are you a an archeologist?" should be "Are you an archeologist?"

https://psnprofiles.com/trophies/6281-nurse-love-addiction

Tachi Masshigura ~Neko Cafe Yuri Goudou~
errors were fixed

http://www.mediafire.com/file/h9w3ln0jqde3boc/%28COMITIA120%29+%5BHomuraya%E2%98%85Pleiades%2C+SC+%28Homura+Subaru%2C+Gyuunyuu+Rinda%29%5D+Tachi+Masshigura+%7ENeko+Cafe+Yuri+Goudou%7E+%5BEnglish%5D.rar

Page 3 (prety -> pretty):
pg 23, "rub aginst me" should be "against"
pg 27, "small and drembling" should be "trembling"
pg 28, "what wiould happen" should be "would"
pg 30, "it the customer's job," should be "is the customer's job"
Page 31 (where -> were):

Several errors were fixed: http://www.mediafire.com/file/h9w3ln0jqde3boc/%28COMITIA120%29+%5BHomuraya%E2%98%85Pleiades%2C+SC+%28Homura+Subaru%2C+Gyuunyuu+Rinda%29%5D+Tachi+Masshigura+%7ENeko+Cafe+Yuri+Goudou%7E+%5BEnglish%5D.rar

last edited at Mar 12, 2020 6:57PM

http://store.steampowered.com/app/550080/VALKYRIE_DRIVE_BHIKKHUNI/

KyouHomu Discourse

pg 13, "If you get that, the hurry up" should be "then hurry up"
pg 21, "The law of cycles gaves those ribbons" should be, "gave"

errors fixed http://imgur.com/a/IKxil

some errors

pg 13, "If you get that, the hurry up" should be "then hurry up"
pg 21, "The law of cycles gaves those ribbons" should be, "gave"

other than that, it is good.

I've added it to my to-do, thank you. It's 1:30AM here though so it'll have to wait until tomorrow.

errors fixed http://imgur.com/a/IKxil

Anata e Tsuzuku Nihosanpo
error in pg 16 was fixed https://exhentai.org/s/46680759f8/1077064-16

pg 16, "I won't let you have any regrets if you stick me" should be "stick with me"

error was fixed https://exhentai.org/s/46680759f8/1077064-16

pg 16, "I won't let you have any regrets if you stick me" should be "stick with me"

ch 6, pg 1, "My sister left home to go the university" should be "to go to university"