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They also move at about the same rate! So...very...slowly.

Hmm. In sheer page count... Green does 4 pages a week, so about 200 pages a year. That's slow compared to pro mangaka ruining their health, but 16 pages a month is pretty good for a Western webcomic. 91 chapters so far, so 364 pages.

Blue Star the past couple years has been doing about 3 chapters a year, of like 35-45 page lengths. Some of the earlier chapters were more like 20 pages, though... One could say 17*30 = 510 pages as a lower bound, huh.

For major event timing, (Blue Star spoilers): one-way confession by the end of chapter 7, so like 210 pages, Green hasn't gotten there, hell Green hasn't had 100% confirmation of romantic feelings even. Blue Star took under 30 pages for Umi to be lustfully gaaaaaay. 19 pages for her to freak out at seeing Shou's bra.

So, Blue Star feels slow because we get 3 big chapters over winter and then have to waiiit. And it is slower than a weekly manga or even a 20-page monthly one. Greenie has modest regular output, but we're at the equivalent of 9-18 longer chapters (40-20 pages), and we're arguably still in the subtext zone. Which, I dunno, maybe isn't that slow. Definitely slower than some, though.

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I won't pass up a chance to recommend my other favorite, The Blue Star On That Day: https://dynasty-scans.com/series/the_blue_star_on_that_day_ano_koro_no_aoi_hoshi

Hah, as the local obsessive analyst of that manga, I can hardly disagree!

It does have a couple similarities with Green. A couple of teen girls figuring out love in a mundane world. (Rather faster at it, too.) More unusually, a high degree of visual background detail that rewards careful re-reading, possibly even more so than Green. You can read it easily for the main story, then read it again and notice what other characters are doing or emoting on the side.

rainbow8
Citrus + discussion 30 Jun 13:18
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  • Teens formerly depicted as horny
  • Literally engaged to be married
  • Literally sharing a bed together

I don't need to see fingers in pussy on screen, but I would like some indication of physicality and passion.

Mei indicated something about backing off and trying to do a relationship properly; it'd be nice to see actually trying to do a relationship properly.

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So, the side couples... are they actually couples yet?

Mari/Kaori: Kaori is all over Mari, and Aki joked about Kao marrying into wealthy, and we have an extra where they're in bedclothes together. OTOH Kaori's idea for a song was about a one-sided crush

Momoka/Hajime: my first exposure was in the anime, which seemed to set up Momoka liking Hajime. But now I know that Momoka had loved Kyou, Haji's sister, which would make romance a bit weird, vs. being unified by shared loss. OTOH, a recent chapter (no link saved) had them standing in an angled chest-to-chest pose that would be weird if you're not dating (or actively doing a partner dance.)

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Well, I just read the whole manga today while waiting for today's episode, and I really enjoyed it!

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Was there any hint of men being able to manipulate the special matter? If only women can do it, then forcing a specialization of labor makes some ruthless sense: letting a woman pilot instead of being piloted and making nets looks inefficient. (But grounding the MC because her nets are "weird" is also inefficient.)

rainbow8
Citrus + discussion 26 Jun 15:50
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why does the bath toy look so worried?

rainbow8
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doh

rainbow8
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why does the bath toy look so worried?

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Gotcha. So basically nothing like A Room for Two.

Well if we're going with silly comparisons, it's pretty much Attack On Titan but with no titans, fighting, or genocide.

There's the "roommates with an unusual relationship they don't talk about" commonality with Room For Two.

rainbow8
Citrus + discussion 25 Jun 12:07
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Stuff like this should have been the vast majority of Citrus+ IMO. This small extra chapter alone did more to make me like Mei and see her as an actual normal young woman than + has done so far in 6 volumes. Mei having a facial expression other than just blank and stoic is so freaking refreshing, it's not even funny (^^)

I know, right?!

Who are Sayaka and Miyabi, and did their chapter not get translated yet?

rainbow8
Citrus + discussion 24 Jun 23:35
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The pinups, without the "small scene" are up on mangadex. They are very cute. Snapshots of a day in their life. Yuzu and Mei being affectionate in small ways, the sort of thing I feel we've been starved of in the main series.

Also, Mei takes naps in school! How scandalous.

rainbow8
joined Jan 14, 2020

Dang. I completely forgot about narcolepsy. Also anemia.

Depression and brain lesions generally present with a range of other more prominent symptoms, so they're more easily recognizable, it doesn't apply to the situation in this story. It's probably anemia, I guess.

Also, good article, thanks.

Anemia seems to cause worse sleep rather than excessive sleep.

And IIRC, Yuna had been showing lots of signs of depression in previous chapters, before the sleeping disorder.

rainbow8
joined Jan 14, 2020

https://www.sleepfoundation.org/physical-health/medical-and-brain-conditions-cause-excessive-sleepiness

It is believed that nearly 80% of people with major depression have excessive daytime sleepiness.

Neurological conditions: Narcolepsy is a prominent example as it is a neurological condition in which the brain cannot properly regulate the sleep-wake cycle. Narcolepsy makes people prone to falling asleep rapidly, including at inopportune times.

Injury and infection: Traumatic brain injury (TBI) and concussions commonly cause sleeping problems, and brain tumors or lesions may provoke excessive sleepiness. Infections, including meningitis

So lots of things.

A friend of mine has hemochromatosis, some condition where iron accumulates rapidly in her blood, at high levels leading to fatigue/sleeping until she gets blood drawn.

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This is sounding like A Room For Two but more explicit sex and less emotional warmth.

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Hey, is that Kiki in your profile picture?

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Reality has a liberal bias.

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That's fine! Thanks for the comments.

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From the title alone, it sounds like it’s gonna be extremely similar to “A Yuri Story About a Girl Who Insists "It's Impossible for Two Girls to Get Together" Completely Falling Within 100 Days” but I’m open to be proven wrong

The premises seem similar but the motivation and energy are very different.

If novel readers want to discuss it, I made a thread.

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So, I've enjoyed Arioto/100 days and I've just gotten into the light novel version of Buying a Classmate. They seem to have similar premises, but are also pretty different, and I wanted to blather about it without filling the Buying manga thread with tons of spoiler bars.

So if you clicked here by mistake, shoo. Spoilers for at least the first few chapters of Classmate.

Right. So Arioto seems pretty straightforward. You see how the deal starts, and the motivations make sense: Mari wants more money and was already flirting with the idea of selling her companionship; a 'bet' over not falling for a girl seems like easy money. Meanwhile Aya is a rich predatory lesbian out to corrupt and seduce her for fun. (What's actually going on might be different, but that's where it starts.) And, going on, Aya's enjoying herself, while Mari wants the money... and is maybe also enjoying herself more than she wants to admit.

While with Classmate... we start in media res, though the start of the arrangement gets flashbacked in short order. But even with Miyagi's POV the motivations seem obscure. Like even to herself, it's just something she did on a whim. The girl getting paid doesn't actually need the money. And neither one seems to actually enjoy the interactions that much, unless both girls are overly competent at lying to themselves.

We do start getting glimpses, though. Miyagi seems to have real friends at school, though they don't come up much outside of it, but her home life is dead and lonely: mother 'gone', father working all the time. While Sendai does have a family life but doesn't like it, toxic parents who keep comparing her to her older sister. So despite having nothing in common (except a growing taste for ero manga), nothing to talk about, and annoying each other a lot, Sendai provides Miyagi with something like companionship and gets a safe-ish space to hang out in return.

It kind of makes sense. But the energy is very different from Arioto...

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Just read the story, and comments... lots of comments about (maybe) suicide, and the mom's girls' school, but none about Miu apparently moving in with Fujiwara while in high school?

rainbow8
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You got the page wrong, but yes, it does look like one.

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If the manga follows the novel, you'll learn more about what the deal is and how it happened. Though the manga did cut out some information that was in the first novel chapter. Miyagi doesn't have a mother. They're well-off but Dad has the usual Too Much Work life.

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whistles in novel

rainbow8
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Isn't Youzi 14 y/o in this time frame? For Youji to pick her up from sleep with ease, this woman sure has strong arms. Just how many cool points does she have?

I think so. I checked my old notes, and Youji has shorter hair when Youzi is 14. https://dynasty-scans.com/forum/posts/875010