Ok NOW I feel like the protagonist is completely irredeemable. I think that rape would have been preventable if Izuru had just pushed Ikumi away and went to Anna's room because she knew what he was capable of.

Also she is definitely Kazuya's daughter. She says she knows him well so their relationship has to be pretty close.

I think we've got a pretty good story on our hands.

I liked this one-shot. I liked how Nico and Maki are sensitive and respectful of each other's "needs". Even though Nico only was the "giver", both of them are happy and that's all that matters right? Would have been perfect without Rin though...

I hate Eli & Umi a lot.

FIGHT ME!!! JK. Seriously though this has nothing to do with the doujin lol.

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Now Rin knows how Nico feels around NozoEli

If he dies now there will be no more story. As the protagonist I feel he has to keep going. I do hope he gets his just desserts at the end though. Using Ikumi as a distraction was quite clever on his part.

Dynasty threads never disappoint :)

As for the one-shot...better late than never right? Kiwa showed conviction at the end so it's a good end in my book regardless of the outcome.

I guess Drill X Angst is the new pairing now.

This is revolutionary and so badly needed to be written. It's like a big middle finger to all those generic inexplicable harem tropes that are so popular all the time.

It ended so abrubtly :(

you can say that again :(

It ended so abruptly :( dammit Umi!!!

That went real tragic real quick.

I'm a fan of this pairing, they just look so good together. For this pairing to work though Umi needs a personality shift.

What about Rinne no Lagrange. The 3 MC are awfully close.

Thanks I will probably check some of these out :)

Before reading I thought for sure Maki was the futa. Dayum Honoka, you packing heat =D.

Quite an enjoyable read.

Except she wasn't about to jump. Her thoughts tell you she wasn't. Its was still kinda over the top yes but im pretty sure she wouldn't have. She was panicking and running not really suicidal (see earlier comments)

Why did she go to the top of the building, to enjoy the nice view? Regardless if she had suicidal intentions from the beginning, she could have died if she had slipped. It was extremely dangerous especially since she wasn't in the right frame of mind.

Also the first place one would think to run, to get away from the person they want to avoid won't be the edge of a building would it?

What a wonderful story. I was waiting for it to be finished before I read it and I made the right decision.

One thing that got to me though, did anyone find it excessive that Miu was just about to freaking jump off the school building? Like if a person does that let alone your lover, wouldn't it mean that their mental stability is a little off.

Of course Rin is going to feel like the odd one out In the future.

^moderator please ban this user for necroposting. =p

Juventus played good but I don't think they're gonna beat barca.

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Well I can say that Jin has never really disappointed me so regardless of which direction the story goes, I think I will enjoy it.

There's always a first time for everything though hehe

I heard $180000000.

Lol what's so bad about or Ronaldo huh? Let's see what happens at Madrid next week =p

You mean there's stuff that isn't bad about Ronaldo?

Juve to win 4-0, you head it here first.

Have you seen this?

Eesh. At the Bernabeu, I hope not.

Pacquiao better win. I've been waiting for that since I learned who Mayweather is.

Well about that...

There is no about that. I live in an alternate universe where Pacquiao knocked him out in the first. Life is good here.

... Did someone say Ronaldo? Boo!

Mayweather said he'll get $200 million, but I've seen people say as 'low' as $150,000,000.

On better news, Liverpool CAN win, but only just, against bottom of the table opposition.

I heard $180000000.

Lol what's so bad about or Ronaldo huh? Let's see what happens at Madrid next week =p

OP most definitely. Whatever interests you. Btw nice derailment...

To be blunt, I just come here to masturbate

Short but very powerful.

Introducing a character -> Establishing a plot -> creating conflict -> resolving conflict -> concluding plot -> closure for characters.

Pacquiao better win. I've been waiting for that since I learned who Mayweather is.

Well about that...

That fight was suspect. I think it should have been a split decision at least but unanimous? Congrats to Money I guess...

OT: Football, Real Madrid, Cristiano Ronaldo

a harem anime with yaoi end will be good.

Fixed it for you. Yup would watch too =D

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treasure "chest" eyyyyyy????? ;D

Hahahahaha good one

Would a happy end generate as much discussion as this. People would mostly comment "it's so cute now i have diabetes kyaaa~" etc. angst is a nice change of pace.

What I feel the author does well is emotionally involve the reader by making them think what would they do in the protagonist's position.