Very cute :) I coulda done with 2-3 volumes of these 2 hooking up/

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That works so much better than if the tomboy was the top :)

Cute and loveydovey but sexy too!

this seemed a bit all over the place. maybe there's context i'm missing?

Yes, it was a bit confusing- like what was the devils daughter bit and the horns? Was that real? something to do with a play?

I did like it- I think it could be borderline fantastic if you could clear up the disjointedness.

Poor Noa lol- I think Miyako and Hana will get married before she gets a break.

She gonna go back tommorrow and buy the modified list lol?

So just kiss sitting down lol

That was fun and funny lol. WTF was with the bit where Meiling was rustling the plastic bag to Sakuya and she barely resisted lol? There was no explaination to that bit - i was like wtf is she meant to be, a cat!? hahaha!

^^ I think they are doing more than that- panties dont normally get dropped for just kissing!

^As it stands I agree, but it could easily become NTR if it had more chapters, and the story focused somewhat on showing the het couple being loveydovey and the guy being sweet, but she keeps cheating on him just for the hot sex.
Im kinda assuming that is the future the author has in mind, assuming they tagged it ntr. If she dumps him right away for the new girl, it really wouldnt want an ntr tag.

Netori is because it's from the POV of our MC. It wouldn't become NTR unless we took the POV of the man, which wouldn't happen. I doubt Sal Jiang labeled this anything of the sort though. NVM: she did.

Not always in fact- tho im not a huge NTR fan ive played some NTR games ive liked that were entirely from the woman's perspective. And some switch between her and the guy. So while you might normally play or be from the guys perspective you can do NTR just fine from the womans as she falls or is pressured into temptation.

To be Netori it needs to be from the perspective of the villian guy stealing the girl away.

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^As it stands I agree, but it could easily become NTR if it had more chapters, and the story focused somewhat on showing the het couple being loveydovey and the guy being sweet, but she keeps cheating on him just for the hot sex.
Im kinda assuming that is the future the author has in mind, assuming they tagged it ntr. If she dumps him right away for the new girl, it really wouldnt want an ntr tag.

^ I assume there is nothing official on them prior to showing up in gensokyo? Its interesting to see origin stories about the sisters and the SDM crew. In my head cannon they are real sisters tho- there can be many reasons to explain why flan is so different to Remi.

lol

Lol- fixed- i knew they'd just been shut and mixed it up with some sony news id read.

F Microsoft!

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^Yeah- like a facehugger lol

^^ I can't bare to play the other paths any more lol

That was a fantastic chapter - with great art - bet it took a lot of work since so much of it was atypical.

Yay! pachi pachi pachi!

I guess its refering to something else from the comments and thus i dont get it.

Not bad- i always tend to like gyaru stories..

But whats up with the last panel lol- no- 'technically speaking' she isnt a hot guy at ALL!

Why do so many lesbians go to mixers for straight people? It's almost it's own sub-genre at this point.

Probably because lesbian mixers are pretty damn rare lol?

What a terrible problem to have. I feel sorry for the prez.. NOT!

Such great art and dialouge :)

And I dunno what Patchy is worried about- her outfit barely stands out from everyone elses lol.

^^ She fell asleep- and it looks like she is about to get a well deserved knife in the forehead or something lol.

Great pic but I hate the effect thats been put on it- mainly down the left and bottom left, it makes me go bozeyed.

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