now that the story reached an importat point, can't ritz find some good assistants, at least for applying toner?
well, i don't really mind, i still love her art, i only wish she doesn't neglect saki for the other work

what happened in the end? why they don't meet anymore?
i probably lost some important part of the plot, because i can't understand what's the cause, the MC is iper-passive, but the blond girl want to be found, then is she going away? the girl the MC call at the end, is she the blind girl or not?

first time i see this 3d !
i'm so happy when i find yuri in my game, like when i played gone home w/o knowing anythings about it.
this time the game is even better and it wasn't in the list at the fist post, Va11 Hall-A cyberpunk bartender

sorry for the OT, has someone played Stardew Valley? i think it's a game i'd like, but it seems time-consuming. i can't understand if it's more similar to Always sometimes monster or To the moon, or it's an Harvest moon in pixel-art.

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then there isn't anyone who understand the last page of this chapter...
i think she saw a pregnancy test, that the girl has bought and hidden in the sweet's bag (not a bad ending, but an halloween's joke ! )
by the way, i expected some horror yuri for halloween...

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i'd hire this artist as characters designer of the next mass effect

in japan is the driver seat on the right ? i was sure it was only in england like that.
here in italy's country there are lots of those cars showed in the first chapter, renault 4 and the old beetle were the first car i drove, and i like how the MC think: cars are better than bikes, bikes are 4 poser!

eh eh, i was thinking: only 7 comments, perhaps still no-one noticed and remarked the news at pag. 9,
how naive, you even already photoshoped it

i was reading some of the comments: is it true that in the canon marisa became a yokai? isn't she the "human magician" anymore ?

this kind of introspective, confusing, marisa x alice romance angst, never get old for me

"we need to talk, please land on the drying rack on that balcony"
i don't know why, but reading this i had an awesome idea about a borderlands2 yuri dj; well, i doubt it will be more absurd than this

i can only image how much all (us) readers had their spirit crashed by the money at the end...
probably the artist thought an ending different from this was too conformist,

I read Mira and Maruta for completely different reasons (well, both are fap material, but I find myself reading Mira sometimes with no intentions to fap). I like Maruta's art style, and on the whole, I like how there's more of a main character thinking about what's happening and how it makes the smut like a fantasy-becoming-reality.
With Mira, the character interactions, relationships, and situations are more central her stories, sometimes killing the pacing with the amount of character that's given (looking at you, Corruption's Finale). The art is hit-or-miss, with some of it pretty well done (by Mira's standards), and some of it not so much. Then again, art style can trump quality, which is something I think Mira's managed to pull off most of the time. I've seen some very well drawn hentai, though (Yuzuki N Dash, Inomaru, and Sena Youtarou, notably).
I like both, but Mira wins for yuri hands down because she's just done more of it, and it's often pure yuri goodness. But personally, Corruption's Finale and Nadeshiko Hiyori are about tied with me.
Jesus, I just realized I'm seriously comparing fap/schlick material, art quality, plot and characters. Kill me now.

i only want to say that in Mira's works there's more plot than porn, i too read those for the story, but Corruption is one of my favorities, the grow of the main is somenthing you don't usually find in short stories.
i compared mira and maruta because they do manga longer than normal one-shot with sex and plot in them,
..and now you can kill me too

in the last manga there was the reverse between the girl from the city and the girls from the bullocks, this time is the tomboysh sporty sempai and the sweet and cute kouai,
well, i'm not looking for a plot here, but i like the art, even if i don't find it very sensual, i don't know why
i still prefer Mira

ah, i'm not the only one confused from the pacing, i understood it wasn't a dream because there wasn't the "whishfull thinking" tag (i often find tags a little oppressing, but they are usefull)

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when i was re-reading this i thought that this has to be an unknow timeline of puella magica: the girl is madoka, the sempai homura, and the other sempai in the club is mami (they all have the same hair too, only different color)

i think this is the 4-koma with the bigger personality grow of the MC

this anthology must be great, there are some of the best one-shot i ever read,
does prequel means it's before the "confession"?

i never read tags, and i don't know if it happens to others also, but there's this strange feeling when, at a certain point of the story, you think :"ah... it's futa..."
i suggest to change the "futanari" tag with the "let-down" or "disappointment" tags.
well, i'm masochist and i'll probably continue to not look at the tags before reading

wow, that was sad,
tags like "depressing.." or "bad end" could totally spoil the reading, especially in short one-shot

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the inverting really works here, you totally expect somenthing like that at the start, but from the girl,

well, it happens in het relations, and w/o age gap, you fall in love with the free, single, person, you can't know he/she remains the same, but often love becomes care and affect, shared memories and the likes, and you don't need to break

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"you were thinking of me so much you grew histerical, right? it's called yandere! it's common, no problem"

it was a bad choice to read kashmir before this ...

it's easy to relate to the protagonist, very often depression starts from "simple" insecurity or lack of self-esteem and respect, not from being bullied at school or from familiar problems; if you don't care about yourself, having a caring family or pityng friends is the worst.
this made me remember a spendid sentence of a writer a love, david wallace, about suicide (and now i have to re-read kashmir to clean the aftertaste, but thanks the same for this great manga)

this is the perfect manga to start a work's week at the end of the summer.
we need more nonsense !

to the post above: i think this manga is legal in Holland, but i'm not sure

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it's a yuri a little atypical, i like it, but i hoped to see the continuation of kuroneko story, that was an interesting character.
is there a 2°part of the first story in this book or it ended like that?

no panties town research on a windy day ...
the final arc is starting, bleach or fairy tail can only dream a last boss like this

I think is still early for the final arc like this chapter implies.
It's still missing Oddman 6 and Oddman 11* and she still needs to beat Oddman 2, 4 and 5
(*Or maybe Setsu will become the Oddman 11)

isn't the oddman 11 the masochist boy?
and i'm not too sure they are really eleven, that's too rational,
well, the oddman 5 isn't one, but two, because she is smart and slutty

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yes. i remember it too,
thanks Dynasty