The nekomura vibes from the art are making me full on miss them, where did they go? D:

!!!!????? That was too adorable, I can't!

Woah shit where is the aaaaangst tag.

I-is it over?

This was a really fascinating place to take this.
I get that the author is probably finished with it,
But I kind of want a story ABOUT her fighting this "destiny" now. Because she is actually in love with the president, not the sister. The turnaround is a great premise, I just want to see that executed.

This is.

Uncomfortably off. Like, I half expect someone to get murdered by the end of it.

W-what.

This ending needed WAY more lead in. It's a fine idea, but the author didn't set this up well enough at all.
I kinda get that the flashbacks were intended to key us into something? But
Look, it's just really abrupt. Like we were being lead along at a rather particular pace and suddenly the rug got yanked out from under us. Was this cut prematurely?

Reading postscripts is a legendary lost art only known to mysterious hermits and a few select initiates these days. Thou shalt embark on a heroic quest to learn its secrets, young padawan.

::snort:: Read? Who is she?

Blugh. :<

Tfw clicking the translator end-panel more aggressively to try and make the next chapter appear.

W-what.

This ending needed WAY more lead in. It's a fine idea, but the author didn't set this up well enough at all.
I kinda get that the flashbacks were intended to key us into something? But
Look, it's just really abrupt. Like we were being lead along at a rather particular pace and suddenly the rug got yanked out from under us. Was this cut prematurely?

This looks like a whole lot of angst.

I'm here for it. ::shrug::

This was so cute. T-T

The art style is interesting. I don't think I mind it at all.

I have extremely mixed feelings about the story itself, though. That was... a time.

I am dying over here. XD I need moreeee.

These two kids are so dumb and I kinda just love it. XD

Wait. That's not the end, is it? When does she go and apologize? What happens next?

Fun fact: 99% of all castles appearing in manga are actually the exact same castle.

Holy cow, you're right. :0

"But why a child, though?" ::looks at the author:: "Oh, gotcha."

Though I think, from a narrative standpoint, it does kind of make sense. At least I can see where it might be coming from, seeing as their positions are swapped where doc is the caretaker for Eve in the end.
But, uh, it maybe could use more deliberate setup if that's where she's going with it.

Oh, I see. She's into vore. That little degenerate.

Lmao, while that’s certainly a possibility after that second last page there I have reason to believe she means “eat” in a more family friendly way than vore.

F-family friendly? XD

OH NO! POOR BABY!

Honestly the way the parents treated this makes this seem more gay than it probably is. XD Mom's whole knowing "go get your girlfriend back" vibe killed me.
Now kisuuu!! >:[

I'm actually relatively sure this isn't a 3d model, but something painted in vr. The goal of the minor rotation was probably to show off the scene and the medium.

I gotta say, without the punchline Hino-san immediately countering an “I feel weird” trope with “There’s nothing weird about you” is an incredibly powerful move.

^^^^^^^

I'm not
really sure
I mean, she sounds just like girls with grub babies tend to sound like? "Ermagrrd they're so pudgy and cute and AAAAaaaAAAaaaaaa."
Though given the context ((i.e. the tags)) and what we know of the author, I can't help but feel a little uncomfortable. xD
Call me back when the girls are a lot older and consent/interest is a lot easier to define, k? k.