For some reason I really like heart-shaped pupils.

I love Yui's straightforwardness.

Also, Azusa's reactions on page 10 killed me.

This is too funny. Can't breathe.

I really, really hope he will respect his own deadline and not just forget it about in the end.
There are already 320 days remaining, she won't make it at this rate.

The deadline itself is kind of vague. Here's hoping this story just gets more interesting as it goes along.

Also, his last words in this chapter gave me chills:

"Drown yourself in the sea of emotion and let it overflow out of you. To reach the filthy beauty known as blues. Welcome, Shiori. To this Hell called creation."

I really liked this. I just wish there was a flashback or something to give us an idea of what they were like as kids . . . so we knew how close they were before. Still really good though.

Ha ha Loved it! <3

This was really pretty.

I don't know why exactly but the line "I'm normal" really bothered me. I still love this though.

"That's what I thought . . ." Doesn't that kind of spell failure?

What a wonderful addition.

This artist is not capable of drawing characters that aren't fat fucks.

I don't even know what to say to this. Just sounds hateful to me. I hope you learn to be a nicer person.

"It was incredibly fun, but I also don't know what got into me."
Sounds about right.

Beautiful. I wish it had been longer.

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That wall scaling though.

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