One last bit before I go to sleep. Platonic or otherwise...how many times can you sleep in the same bed with someone until it dawns completely on either you, or the other? Who sets the tags? Does Dynasty decide what should be what, or do the people who submit the work decide the tags? Cause someone is either not paying attention, fucking with us to build-up attention, or already knows how it ends and is trying to keep us from wasting all of our effort in hoping for this teasing of the reader to end.

Two Cents

Their relationship is like a stereotypical male and female couple from two (or three) generations ago.

Yes. And?

And nothing. I was just giving context to my actual point.

CH. 26

That dick doesn't even hold back. Don't give no fucks here. No fucks given by daddy here. This is going to be crazy awesome.

Just sleep...You'll get used to it.

LOVE IT!

I'm noticing some odd similarities here.

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Chapter 7.5

HAHAHAHAHA!

This is better than the other storyline!

Bitch actually shows us proof she killed someone on an impulse of murderous intent!

I hope Kagisora Tomiyaki continues both of these versions!

Okay...I like it...but,

Took me awhile to figure out they're in China. Or am I still lost?

With what I am assuming is Chinese (and if it isn't fuck this sentence) I hate how the names are so unfamilar and have so many different forms that while I am reading the names blend in like they're talking about a place, or a beverage...or something.

If all that is petty (pretty sure it is if I studied any basic Chinese...I mean the same can be said for the basics of any language) then my last complaint is the only valid one. I mean it's probably me, but...it's still ya know, me. The series is tagged [Read left to right] but sometimes it seems like it's [Read down to up] and then it also becomes [Read right to left] at other times and sometimes it's a combination of two of those ways or a mixture of all three. Maybe I could get some direction here. It's not a bad thing, it just throws off the flow for me.

Iruru gave her big breasts?

Their relationship is like a stereotypical male and female couple from two (or three) generations ago.

Chapter 10, Panel 5, Column A is like a perfect example of this, "Honey, I got you a new kitchen appliance for a present. Now get in the kitchen and use it."

(Teach me how to black out spoilers.)

Ch. 23:

This love they are building is one of the purest forms I have ever seen in a story. I keep pulling up the pages, not reading because I know what they are saying already, just watching them. It fills me with such a beautiful calmness. I can honestly say that that kiss was so rich and splendid, it could not have been done better. Fighting herself to do it, not because she owed it, but because she honestly wanted to. How is that not the pursuit of love? Forcing yourself to get what you really desire.

P.S. I'm going to be on pages 21, 22, and 23 for a little while longer today. You all know why.

Matsuri: "Taniguchi-Senpai. I also have a crack in my shield for you."

You do know this is an edit right?

Then I feel like a fool, but...

Matsuri: "With this... looks like I found a crack in your shield." "This was a valuable date... bye."

Crazy bitch put the lock at the bottom of the door. Doesn't give a fuck about how insane her actions are. Then justifies her decisions because it gives her her sugar happy life. I fucking love yandere. Tsundere is an annoying tease. Yandere is like, "What made you think your assessment of me was correct?"

I am uncertain that losing years on one's lifespan was an appropriate first test for love. Especially the means. But tis is love.

I don't really get why Saburouta wasted an extra chapter on Matsuri...NOT BEING WITH HARUMIN! I mean come on!

Yes, the 3P joke was cute, and we knew she'd bring it up again, but a play on words joke over it being carried out for an entire extra chapter. No, no. I want to see more of Matsuri and Harumin.

Matsuri: "Taniguchi-Senpai. I also have a crack in my shield for you."

I mean...that was a total jerk. And no followup as of yet has left me annoyed, but seeing her again...WITHOUT HARUMIN...just leaves me frustrated. And not the good kind of "frustrated" that inspires characters to follow their feelings.

Fuck it! I don't want to just jump on the next issue to come out! Until my inbox says something analogous to "Matsuri x Harumin" I'm just going to hold off on all the chapters in between.

...

Who dafuq am I kidding...

With 119 pages of comments, I'm sure this has been addressed.

I think the lure to this series stems from the polar opposites, not just the characters, but also the ways they try to reach each other.

Mei is a tangled mess. Pointing out where she does not find conflict in her heart is easier than listing all of the conflict itself, and yet while she resides in that conflict she keeps trying to express herself.

Yuzu has no real conflicts within her heart, but she creates them for the sake of others. She feels a great deal for Mei, but she restrains it in order to allow Mei the chance to see Yuzu for herself.

Mei was impulsive with her love, despite her normally calm and coordinated lifestyle.

Yuzu was restrained with her love, despite her normally zealous and unbridled lifestyle.

Love will always involve changing yourself, and it can leave you permanently changed. The entertainment here may have to do with how each is changing to be more like the other in order to get closer to each other. This "Ch. 17" was a prime example of that. Despite being praised for her "real self" by a middle school student, she changed her hair color to set a better example, most likely to please Mei. Mei made it clear she knows it would be a front, but also makes it clear it would make her happy to see the change in Yuzu's behavior.

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Thank you so much for Chapter 27.

I really like how you put the feathers in there. Like a subtle notion of Homura: I made this place for us, Madoka.

Thank you. I am on the fifth chapter of Lily Love and I already love your mind. I am one who does not believe in homosexuality or heterosexuality and that people will all find someone to love and be loved by. I thought I was alone, but now I see that the concept is already in the minds of others. Thank you for putting that message in your works, thank you.

Is Aika the girl from LOVE/DEATH chapter 5?

Oh my God, I found my soulmate. This guy is awesome.

First off: This single chapter of this story, is the first time I've ever decided to make a profile and leave a comment.

Now, I want to draw focus on something I didn't see, or didn't look hard enough for, in the comments. On page 35, Shina remarks that KuroNeko is rather noble. KN is stunned in the next frame. Page 36 KN becomes bitter with some possible thoughts on how Shina's comment is offensive to her, either by how Shina has been treating her recently, or because of some "possible" memory KN has of getting such praise and only getting hurt by the person who had given her similar praise.

If KN's bitter reaction is related to a memory of another person, her following action on the remainder of page 36 and onto page 37 could be an attempt to give Shina a chance to be the one person in her life to tell her the truth and live with it. If Shina replies with no reciprocation of her feelings being the same, and lies, she may not ever get a third chance. Third being that after denying KN to other classmates of no great importance to Shina, KN let her in once again giving her a second chance already.

Here is the reason I was really thinking about. I know people like KuroNeko. They were born without a basic understanding of how to deal with situations that require tact. They don't understand the purpose. But do note that she is one who will state the obvious. We all think to ourselves inside or own heads. People like KN do the same. If she is honest and straightforward about what is the truth to others, then she is definitely the same with herself. After saying something she shouldn't she most likely tells herself the truth in what she has just done, just like she would for anyone else that makes a mistake. I doubt she is without hindsight, and I am certain she reflects on things she has done inside her own head. Telling herself why people reacted the way they did to her, giving herself the same truth she tells others about things we already know were obvious before she said them. Let's say she's at least 15 years old (please correct me if anyone has a better guess). In all that time do you really believe that she hasn't been...not corrupted...but educated to some degree in how people are able to lie to get what they want, instead of just telling the truth directly. I hope I am wrong, but I also hope I am right in some ways too. KuroNeko could be plotting to put Shina through the same pain Shina has caused her. KN wasn't throwing that anger at Yoshida. We can all see she was really angry at herself and more importantly Shina. KN let Shina make a guilty attempt at apologizing by not ignoring her when she was handed the Enamel Remover. And the first thing Shina asks for after apologizing is to have sex with her. The first thing! What the hell!? That's what she believes will make things all better? "Going all the way!"? Like she's doing it for KuroNeko's sake. And the minute it's over she gives her semi-shallow praise on being so, so noble of a person. I believe KuroNeko did give her that second chance. That second chance to tell the truth. To let Shina be the one to say, "I'm a liar and I hurt you, but I've fallen in love with you and I'm sorry!" But instead Shina just tells KN what she already knows. KN has to be thinking, "That bitch! I give her what she wants! My body! And the only thing she has to do is tell me the truth. Tell me why she wants me so badly. Be honest with me! But instead she tries to act all cute and nice. Just like everyone else in my life! I give them everything I have, and they give me nothing! They deserve the same! They all do! Especially her! Especially the one who hurt me more than anyone ever! She deserves nothing but pain! My pain! Just as she's given to me!" And thus she turns around, pauses to think of how to set her trap, and drops the biggest bomb she can think of. Knowing that everyone believes she only tells the truth, and whether she realizes it or not it is the truth, she confesses her love for Shina in full. Hoping its finally enough to get Shina to be honest, and most likely even more bitter that this is what it took to get the truth out of her. Of course you can all guess what would be suitable for vengeance after that.