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joined Mar 12, 2014

I never really like this manga, it is too sensitive for me... It makes me feel tiring and sad, until the ending of course, by then I just breath out in relief and think the mc is a super lucky girl. The supposed unrequited aspect is definitely the reason why this story feels so depressing to me.

Still, as I was rereading it, I realized how this story portraited so well the image of an "unreachable" crush, and the feeling of falling for them. Even though Chizuru constantly praised Kanae, there were moments when she was intimidated by Kanae. She put Kanae on such a high pedestal that the idea of being loved back seemed impossible. She chose the most passive way to express her feelings, and only for herself to see. Because of this, despite being the embodiment of beauty in Chizuru's mind, Kanae still appeared to be stone cold (and so so far away) at the same time, both to Chizuru and the reader. When the feeling turned out to be mutual, then you saw Kanae expressed more emotions.

Maybe I read into this too much, but I just like the idea of breaking someone's inhuman (good or bad) image in one's mind, revealing that someone to be just a normal person, and not so unreachable as you first thought.

Anw, that's another way to read this manga. I still don't really like it, but it is a fine read.

P.s: Just bring your crush under the sunset with you, then your feeling will be returned.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

So Suwako is an alien! I knew it right from the start!!

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joined Mar 12, 2014

At first glance I was hoping this was gonna be about a dog girl and her owner. I was kind of dissapointed, but this is fine too.

I love it when Kayo gets all manipulative at the end, terrible moves for terrible ppl. Also the cat comparison is pretty cool.

Surprisingly this is pretty fun for me, it's the first story in which the cheated-on character is the one being manipulative. Of course even then the relationship is still on hellfire, but I do love myself some refreshing reversal such as this.

last edited at Feb 21, 2018 9:02AM

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Am waiting for the nice boat scene.

last edited at Feb 20, 2018 12:00PM

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Really romantic and cute. I don't watch Idol master or even have interest in watching it, but this certainly made me want to find out more about these characters.

There's something very genuine about them, I can't pinpoint it, but I can definitely say they seems realistic to me.

I avoided this because the girls look the same, glad I finally got down to it.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Ok, why do all seem to assume spy and doc is a thing already?

How are they not a couple? Right after spy telling doc ab the tropical island dream, which is a good thing with no draw back for doc, doc just told her "i'm gonna sleep with some guy." If doc is together with spy, and is also a cheater, why would she mention it at that moment? It's more like she felt terrible because this cutie is risking her life for her and use that as a way to say "stay away", then when spy got all hurt, doc finally decided to speak her mind, but she was a tsun, so she spun her last statement into a clumsy way of saying "Please be more careful w your mission, also I miss you."

Spy might be going after doc, while doc is like "your job is too dangerous, i dont wanna moan anyone while im still young." Clearly doc likes spy, but she might also be someone who has lost her beloved(s) and doesn't want to get in a serious relationship again.

With all that said, truth is this is a badly written short. Spy is talking about their future as a couple, but doc acts as if they aren't in a relationship at all, this clearly contradicts. Also their faces are so similar and it annoys me.

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You're... discussion 09 Feb 01:59
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joined Mar 12, 2014

What is this new form of sex? So lewd.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Oh a student dealing with their love for their teacher in a mature way, I haven't seen that in a long while. Very noice, def waiting for more.

Also the title is just wonderful.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Lol best comedy ever, almost The Room's level of entertainment. This artist is like the Tommy Wiseau of yuri.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

First I was skeptical of their decision to just run away from responsibility, but then the story took to that issue. It was a genuine surprise to me, really nice surprise, too.

Even though the ending is not good for our girls, I can't dislike it, since this decision is also their growth. But tbh, I'd like to see the girls finding another solution on their own, because I hate reality.

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Snow White discussion 31 Jan 15:20
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Someone in the Love Live universe will be watching this play while holding their head screaming internally: "THIS.SHIT.IS.TOO.METAAAAAAAAaaaaaaa"

Then they died.

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The jar thing... such an unfortunate implication. I think it's just some bad way to say I think you are a work of art and I want to keep you for myself. Possesion seems like a theme in this shot, with blondie bullying her love because she doesn't want anyone to touch her, so I guess ending that way isn't irrelevant.

It's OE, so I'm just gonna think science girl is shitty as metaphors and expressions.

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Smh these stories always give me a warm fuzzy feeling, even the tragedic ones.

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Yes yes yes that's def it. Thanks a whole lot.

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I'm trying to find this manga that is a two-shots, the setting is probably just after the world war, the first shot is about a short black-haired girl finding her life in her town (which she call a "coal town") boring and suffocating, the only thing that motivates her is her love interest, a blondie. They are about 16-17 yrolds I think. There's also this abandoned train tunnel leading out of town that is symbolic for their freedom. The second is blondie's pov about her family and her love for blackhair, her dad died(?) in the war and she hate her mom for getting new partners when her dad isn't with them.

There's this brief sex scene between them that is some kind of weird ritual, and the manga is pretty atmospheric, it uses a lot of black and smoky effect.

I would be super thankful if someone help me find it, I tried the historical tag but no result. I'm definitely sure I read it on Dynasty btw.

last edited at Jan 30, 2018 12:28PM

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This turned out better than I thought for sth so... weird.

ANW, I don't feel too bad about this since the author played the lolicon card as "Mimika likes Kaede because her personality, not because she is a lil kid". How Mimika notices every detail about Kaede, with borderline sexual undertone no less, creeps me out. Then turned out she only did that with Kaede. Doesn't make it better but... I guess I'm kinda ok with it since Mimika know how to Kodama.

The artstyle helps detaching this from reality, so I don't feel really bad enjoying it. Sometimes I even forget Kaede is 12-13.

I would say this is cute, but tbh I'm still conflicted. Is this normalizing paedophilia though? I don't know, I'm so lost right now. I'm not trying to cause flame, I just really don't know how to deal with this story ab loli... Please delete this if it causes any trouble.

last edited at Apr 3, 2018 10:52AM

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Mono-Eye discussion 28 Jan 14:37
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joined Mar 12, 2014

Is it really possible for a straight person to enjoy gay sex jist by using aphrosidiac?

When black hair said she knew twintails would use the big end of the toy on her, for a spilt moment I felt kinda sad for black hair, twintails knew it was her first time but still didn't hesitate to go rough. I mean come on, at least be considerate, for those 500k.

Anw, typical terrible ppl being terrible to each other.

last edited at Jan 28, 2018 2:39PM

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Lol this manga is so ridiculous, I'll just read it to see how convoluted it can get, and laugh at the sheer stupidity these puppets get.

Seriously speaking, these characters are just victims of really really bad writing, they act as tools to keep the pointless drama going, not as humans with common senses. There is just no point in caring about this in any serious way whatsoever, for me at least.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

One little problem though. At times it seems like it was dangerously close to becoming a porn comic. Google tells me the author is a hentai artist, and it really shows.

What gave the hentai experience away?
The moment you realised the little girl used tongue?
Besides that, I didnt really see much

I get the hentai vibe out of this too, and tbh they definitely would have gone all the way if the teacher hadn't interrupted. I blame it on this artstyle being familiar to some hentai styles, and the top right panel on page 7 (that doze off face sure brought back memory I don't want to be brought back...): https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/playing_house#7

Anw, cute story, I love the reversal when the girl who looks stronger has to be pulled up by the girl who looks weaker.

last edited at Jan 25, 2018 11:36AM

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joined Mar 12, 2014

lol at this rate this has become utter comedy to me. You can never take shit like this seriously, and you shouldn't. Every character is impossibly dumb, bad attempt at "shoking" the viewer.

Feel like I'm getting stupid just by reading it with my logic switch on.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

Can somebody explain the Maki-baby translation? Is it a smoother nickname in Japanese that just doesn't translate that well?

The "baby" is probably replacement for "chan", I guess the translator just wanna spice thing up abit. I find it cute either way, except "babe", "babe" makes me feel like reading a doujin in which Maki is a sheep girl, and that thirst will never be fulfilled.

Amount of sex varies from couples to couples, in this case there's just a rainbow banner with "No limitation" written on it wrapped around these two.

I love how Honk/Honker has become Honoka's nickname. Super cute doujin.

last edited at Jan 12, 2018 8:51AM

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What I want to know is, what did the mob boss do with all that mermaid flesh? If he (or someone else) ate it, then the curse would pass on, same as with the cook.

I think the mob boss didn't know about the mermaid meat thing. There's a high chance Miyuki only told it to the cook, because even if she was so desperately wanted to die, she wouldn't want to "benefit" her torturer.

My take on this is the meat only passes the curse to one person, then it becomes normal meat, and eating probably speeds up the healing process. These speculations just make the story more depressing than I expected.

Considering that all above is true, why didn't Miyuki eat her torturer? The mob boss was totally bare in that torture chamber, and even if he had been amoured, she could still go after him times and times again till she succeed. This makes me think alot about Miyuki's attitude toward cannibalism.

Miyuki lost her will for living a long time ago, she felt pain but was numb to it, she gave no care whether she lived or died, that was part of why she didn't care to protest, to get out of her current situation. However shitty her life was, she never resorted to cannibalism though (if she had, the mob would have known and kept her in check), because "eating flesh" like that, in her mind, was the root of her misery. The "weird fish" she mentioned was clearly a mermaid, with upper human body. Her calling the mermaid a "weird fish" also shows that she still didn't want to admit being a cannibal, she was still conflicted over it, all the while knew exactly what she did, this would turn up later on.

At last, seeing the cook's human decency and tasting good food made with care probably reminded her that she was a human after all, not an emotionless monster. That was the point when she started to care for her life, and that was why she wanted to die, providing the cook with a mean to escape probably was a contributor, too. After realizing that, she finally refered to the mermaid as "she", I think that was the moment Miyuki owned up to her crime. The title "Primo Piatto" is translated to "first course of a meal", I know it's "the first of a three-course meal", but can we also interpret it as "the first dish"? As in, the first real food ever that Miyuki eat, which make her felt like a human and not like a cannibal - a thought that had haunted her ever since she ate that mermaid flesh out of hunger.

She passed her curse on to a person who was nice to her, yes, but it was the only way they both could escape. The ending makes this all the more depressing, seeing how the cook didn't condemn the crime of cannibalism, but kept falling into the abyss (those guys are assholes, but remember cook had to eat Miyuki first, and that horrible action probably pushed him over the limit). Well, at least we know Miyuki has finally let her guilt go and be free.

Tl; dr: Cannibalism is bad. Dowman Sayman is awesome.

last edited at Jan 12, 2018 7:10AM

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Yeah, it's pretty clear that a lot of the sex in this work (and in the previous work) is het sex but with two girls. (Lesbians doing it doggy-style without a strap-on? wat?) And normally I'd be all eye-rolly at that.

But these two are just so charming and cute and lovey-dovey that I'm okay with the sex not really making a ton of physical sense.

I think it is pretty understandable with these two. They probably just search yuri hentai on the internet and follow through. Despite being inhumanly lustful (not a bad thing in this case btw), they seem like they only know how to masturbate (for Kaya she didn't even consider it until the incident). That's one more comfortable way to think of it, rather than because artist doesn't know much about lespies' sex.

This is just cute. The more docile moments just feel super heart-warming, likely because they are surrounded by crazy water splurting. That time when Kaya ask for a hug after sex, I never thought water slatter porn like this can be that damn cute.

Nice.

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joined Mar 12, 2014

It's possible. But the author draws both futanari x female and female x female, so the latter is equally possible.

We never got a chance see and may never find out, ergo:

Schrödinger's genitalia

P.S. S-rank title.

Pfttt

Gold.

They lost track of their iniatial goal, not thar it's a bad thig though~

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Image Comments 10 Jan 12:01
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Shouldn't this have a Lolicon tag?