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"How pretty...I like their outfits, they look so...HOLY SHIT THOSE CLAWS!"
^My thoughts as my eyes moved from their face, across their bodies, and finally down their limbs. That caught me off guard.

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Nina's contemplating going for a pinning move. Ever the top.

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Gentle, soft, and sweet. Love it.

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Didn't realize this was a pairing. Interesting.
Way behind on the manga and don't read the LN so I've probably missed some interactions they've had.
Or it's a case of fanartists crackshipping.

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So true, bestie!

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edit: also RIP tomboy childhood best friend. she never stood a chance. :(

The inclusion of the childhood friend in the story is almost as puzzling as the 1 year time skip and break-neck pacing in general.
So far she's just here to suffer with no other obvious purpose. Maybe she'll catch the MC on the rebound from her heartbreak over her crush seeming to be "straight".
But I doubt it because that would mean a lot of drama and this doesn't seem like the type of story to dive deep into that love triangle drama.

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^Lmao yes "back hugs" is all that is going on here and with the BoKita pic

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Pacing aside, this has the bones of a good story. Unfortunately pacing is a big part of what makes a story good.

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Comphet arc incoming...maybe next school year. Probably first day of school again.

Nah, childhood friend detects opportunity and goes in for the kill.

Lmao.

You, me, and the childhood friend all have about the same percentage chance of winning.

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Comphet arc incoming...maybe next school year. Probably first day of school again.

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^A bit dramatic but thanks for bumping the thread so I could read this for the first time.

Kyubey using the "Akemi Homura, do you intend to become a god?!" quote in response to her lightning quick bra unhooking had me snorting with laughter. https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/madoka_and_homura_are_starting_something_lewd#7

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I heard that Sendai and Miyagi are both Switch, I wonder if this is true? If so, does that mean this series has 18+ scenes?

Kinda vague WN spoilers There have been a couple of sex scenes. Not graphic but still detailed and erotic. Neither of the characters have a defined "role" when having sex, so perhaps you could describe them as "switch" if you want. I simply consider them to have the "default" or "standard" approach to sex, where both partners give and receive pleasure.

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^Fujimoto erasing hands next week. Better call mom for help!

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Side note: Hopefully we get a chapter of Fuuko reading to Yuni! It would be amazing to see Fuuko recreate the times she cherished with her grandmother.

Well Fuuko does want to be Yuni's momma so some Mother/Daughter story-time sounds like a great activity! :P

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And now begins the best hot spring filler episode ever

Yes! The hot spring trip is great! I don't know why you'd call it "filler" though since it's a case file (#14) just like the other arcs.

"These goddamn useless lesbians!" - Kozakura, probably

When Toriko heard it was nude bathing, I imagine her brain quickly weighed "embarrassment about being seen nude" vs "desire to see Sorawo nude" and the desire immediately won.

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^Reading a ship named "Futa-anything" paints a very different mental image for me.

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^Nina is just proving to Hina that she's the better kisser. Gonna show her who's better at sex later. #JustRivalThings

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I recognize this one. "So true bestie. Pegs you"

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Looks like Shikanoko sure "Nokonoko'd" the Koshitantan, if ya know what I mean.

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A flashback so long I forgot the main characters were someone else. It definitely could have been condensed to "Rei was Queen of the school with a fanclub. We were friends but then started dating". Several chapters into the flashback and we're not even to the separation part yet.

Been a bit since I read them, but I think the earlier chapters gave me the impression it was an unrequited love for Rei, not that they had dated.

Glad you're still translating this because it's an enjoyable read.

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Yeah definitely a work that could've used an editor. The bones of an interesting yuri romance is there but it rushes things and gets a bit muddled at times.

Still enjoyed reading it though.

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Little Fuuko was so cute

Just adorable! Something must be wrong with her mom and brothers if they can be mean to such a cute little Fuuko!

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Lmao Nanase's character profile almost seems like the author is making fun of her. Feels like so much volleyball...which is as expected lol

Interesting about Nanase being described as having experienced "ordinary happiness", which is the best type of happiness that Fuuko and Yuni lacked.
There was little doubt that Yuni and Fuuko were on the same wavelengh, which was completely different from Nanase's. And here the author is directly confirming it.

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^And Reina, obviously. Can't believe Kumiko would cheat on her canon girlfriend (ok...so headcanon but whatever)

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GOOD MORNING BIG BROTHER Bocchi-chan!