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joined Mar 25, 2013

That Witch! by Zoe Lynne is pretty light. It reads a little bit like a coming-out story. There's no angst per say, as in there isn't a fallout between them after they get together which was pretty nice. My only gripe is that they said "I love you" too soon to each other, but it could be chalked up to the emotional state they were in. Pretty nice story

Spectrum by MJ Duncan is also pretty good. Haven't finished it yet but if the people from /u/ are correct, there's gonna be only one time that is a little off and everything else is sweet. I'm halfway through and it is nice.

last edited at Nov 16, 2015 6:39PM

telamon
Magan&Danai discussion 15 Nov 16:49
joined Mar 25, 2013

I'm glad to do it myself too, following their weibo I mean ~ It satisfies my fangirling anyway haha
Btw, ermuzibu is back to drawing. Her statuses seems delightful the last few days. ^ ^

Glad they're happy again.

Are there untranslated ones left or are we caught up?

Also I wonder if we'll get a chapter about how they get together.

last edited at Nov 15, 2015 5:26PM

telamon
Rapunzel discussion 14 Nov 04:28
joined Mar 25, 2013

That was really nice. Hopefully there are many more xD

telamon
Their Story discussion 13 Nov 17:38
joined Mar 25, 2013

Oh, any additional art from tanjiu that is not uploaded?

telamon
Their Story discussion 13 Nov 17:35
joined Mar 25, 2013

Stupid cliffhangers.. Someone should burn the person who invented them..

joined Mar 25, 2013

I find the peculiarly placed squeeze and twitches on page 3 to be a sign that Mokou's hands are tired after all the tickling, so she's stretching them out. I don't know what everyone else's lewd minds are thinking.

You can see the twitches and squeezes most prominently in hentai almost exclusively as the girl's/woman's vaginal walls do that around the penis/dildo/whatever. Which means that Kaguya was very much liking her 'tickling'

joined Mar 25, 2013

I've already suggested this use the guro tag, but that's just me...

Well, I for one don't know what that tag is... do I want to know?

It means dismemberment, blood and entrails and whatever else. Japanese term for gore.

joined Mar 25, 2013

Wait, that's not tickling that they do like the title says... Right? O_o

Well you never see any hands on her sides. It could be on her feet, but Mokou is in between her legs 'grinding' so it's lewd 'tickling' ;)

last edited at Nov 13, 2015 9:14AM

joined Mar 25, 2013

Just one question Mei feng/Meifon? which one is it? I got kinda confused along the way. Ok, it's Taiwanese but how should I spell it?

According to Nev it's Mei Feng :]

Beauty pageant huh? I wonder if Mamori will swoon when she sees her xD

joined Mar 25, 2013

A handful of the Yuri Hime Wildrose stories got short follow-ups in Petite Yuri HIme.

So is there a follow-up for this one?

joined Mar 25, 2013

Okay what the fuck.

I've been looking for fanart on twitter, found a lot of good stuff. I favorited and retweeted most of it, go back a few hours later and I found that at least two artists have blocked me. What the fuck.

Probably because you're not from Japan or something.

joined Mar 25, 2013

Why question the decision when it's clear it's the same characters, in the same environment? There are probably a few 'one-shots' that are in the same boat as this one, but are not grouped, and I bet people would want them to be in one group because they're relevant to each other. I certainly would.

I really don't get what's disjointed about it. I probably edited it too late when you wrote your reply but I'll just quote what I said

And even if it was a thought out two-shot, the intended development was never the talk, it was a confrontation of their feelings. What transpired in the second chapter is more than enough to see that they will indeed talk after Nanako comes back.

last edited at Nov 11, 2015 8:48PM

joined Mar 25, 2013

It's still not addressed at all after it being a fairly major point in the first chapter. Deciding not to tell her would be understandable but the story should address that choice since it was intended to be the next major development after the end of the first chapter.

If you see where the two chapters are published, it's clear that it was not made to be a two-shot, hence why it's not addressed here. It reads as a one-shot. Both read as separate one-shots with the same continuity. If they weren't grouped I bet that you'd never even guess that there was another 'chapter'.

And even if it was a thought out two-shot, the intended development was never the talk, it was a confrontation of their feelings. What transpired in the second chapter is more than enough to see that they will indeed talk after Nanako comes back.

last edited at Nov 11, 2015 8:37PM

joined Mar 25, 2013

I think you misunderstood what I meant. (Or I'm not on the same page as you here.) I know that it showed some flashbacks of her memories of living but in chapter one she resolved that she was going to tell Yui the truth about remembering her past when she got home then that never happened. It's not even implied that it happened off-screen or anything either. Since that was kinda a fairly major detail in the first chapter it really results in the second chapter feeling really disjointed.

I'm not referring to the flashbacks. I'm just saying that Nanako just got scared and chose not to tell her ultimately. It's not that big a deal. To me at least, it's understandable considering the situation.

Yeah, I know. That's not what I meant though. Even ignoring the part where chapter 1 is almost completely disconnected from the events of chapter 2 they both confess their feelings to the other, Yui falls asleep, then when she wakes up Nanako is gone without any explanation at all and is clearly gone for many years judging by the last page.

It's not years, it's at most, by my assumption, a few weeks. Maybe a month. And as I said (showed through the other manga), Nanako got resolution to whatever bound her there and that's why she disappeared. I don't see the disconnection you seem to feel is there.

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Is it just me or did the story seem to kinda derail itself there? Chapter 1 ends with Nanako vowing to tell Yui that she remembers her past then chapter 2 doesn't even touch on that and instead she suddenly inexplicably has a physical body long enough for a sex scene after which she just completely disappears without explanation.

It does touch upon the past thing, it's just that she chooses to not address it, after Yui asks her about it. If you go by what is widely accepted when dealing with ghosts or read this then her disappearing isn't weird, her having a physical body can be attributed to strong emotional feelings, and she does come back. Look at the last page again.

joined Mar 25, 2013

There's no way to slight spoiler it but here you go:
There's no confirmation about any kind of relationship but they move in together.

And so we come back to Stretch!

joined Mar 25, 2013

^Yokohama Kaidashi Kikou is an amazing SoL manga, but don't read it for the yuri. Strong subtext yes, but definitely not a real yuri manga. The ending doesn't disappoint though.

Slight spoiler for the ending? In what way it doesn't disappoint?

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telamon
Image Comments 11 Nov 16:48
joined Mar 25, 2013
Pocky%20day

^ It's pocky day..

joined Mar 25, 2013

She was bullied? I must have missed/forgot about it. I don't disagree though. I think obsessing over prince fantasy works more or less the same though.

Yeah, it was shown in the second episode I think. When she complained about her prince on a horse and showed a faceless guy being replaced by Mirei.

joined Mar 25, 2013

Thanks Nevri for the translations :] Now because I'm greedy, I'll hope that a kind soul will typeset them again xD

I didn't see them mention Akira at all in the radio show though. Guess I missed it, don't really want to go through it again xD

I'm surprised no one made notice that Mamori didn't react at all to Akira when 'he' showed up. When Akira showed up I was like 'please don't ruin the potential moment, please don't ruin the potential moment ...' xD I'm glad that they didn't 'ruin' the moment between Mamori and Mirei that happened before the ED song.

Also Mirei throughout the episode is just adorable, more or less eyes glued to Mamori, and how protective she is of her. Also the scene where Mamori sings about mushrooms, the look she gives is all you need to know xD

Even if the episode was a little bit of filler in terms of plot (even then it wasn't entirely filler, because it revealed a few things about Ecstar and Liberators), more importantly they showed progression of Mirei and Mamori's relationship. In my opinion this was not a filler episode, it was only a little bit lighter compared to previous ones, that's why it feels like filler.

Edit: As for Mamori's sexuality, I think we shouldn't take in stock about her prince fantasies. Keep in mind that she was bullied a lot and the prince in the fantasies is protecting her. When Mirei saves her, she instantly projects the prince persona on her, because she protected her. When Akira showed up and diffused the situation entirely, she latched onto 'him' and the reason she is so stuck on 'him' is because 'he' projects the typical prince persona, as well as because 'he' "protected" Mamori. Now, if Mirei was a little more princely, I don't think Mamori would latch onto Akira so fiercely. The prince fantasies are an escape for her, because she was bullied and wanted someone to protect her, Akira is the person with the most power. When 'he' ordered the people that were attacking them to stop and they did, 'he' superseded Mirei, because a) he stopped the situation from escalating when Mirei was beaten and b) because 'he' projects the prince persona that Mamori is so fixated on for protecting her.

I'm not saying Mamori is some power hungry girl, just that she wants to be protected and currently Akira holds the most power, and the prince fantasies has nothing to do with her sexuality. Her sexuality is 'stunted' you might say, because she was constantly bullied, and it is just now awakening, because of what's happening on the island and how it happens. But that's just my opinion :]

last edited at Nov 11, 2015 5:47AM

joined Mar 25, 2013

Wow, quite a lot has been added. Inkling the playa xD

telamon
Fanfictions 09 Nov 05:26
joined Mar 25, 2013

My one and only recommend will be about a fic/author

Locked Away

This is in my opinion the best Elsanna fic. It is Frozen-verse post-movie. It is angsty for the first two-ish chapters, but the payout is biiiig. The way Elsa is written is just.. Gotta read it. There are also subtle hints as to Anna's feelings towards Elsa that could be interpreted that were there before the fic, despite what she does at the start. I have confirmed it with the author, because I re-read it 5+ times back-to-back after I finished it and had to write to her. There will also be a little one-shot sequel that shows their kids (conceived by magic most likely)

Thaw's End by her is another high recommend but it's not finished yet, there's no angst in that one. It was more of a test fic to get a feel for the characters.

She also has 2 Dragon Age fics with Josephine x Elf!Inquisitor, and quite a few ShizNat fics. I highly recommend her, as well the Crazy Little Things by dreiser from Uranus, the intimacy there from Luna just makes you melt.

last edited at Nov 9, 2015 5:27AM

joined Mar 25, 2013

Anyone manage to find the first episode of 'Transit Girls' to download? I'm a little surprised it isn't out by now, considering what it's about. It isn't up on avistaz and nyaa (though I don't know if they upload live action there), and since d-addicts took down their torrent service (making the site a little dead) don't know where else to look.

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Looks like Yuki is getting real attached to our MC (:

Great to see another chapter.

telamon
joined Mar 25, 2013

Kinda reminded me of a one shot from awhile back bout a mistress that blindfolds her clients and hided her identity then she quit to have a normal job only to find her new boss is an old regular. And now I can't seem to find it. I know this is gonna bother me for awhile...

The Rules of Zero by Isya