its so melodramatic. the running back to the lover you spurned just to see them with someone else (misunderstanding or not) is so overdone now, stories should seek to subvert the trope imo otherwise the author looks like they aren't very self-aware
It's pretty much standard shoujo manga narrative. It's done all the time in manga for little girls, and sometimes in manga for adult women too (like this one is supposed to be). It's not especially good or bad, just formulaic.
Wow this story truly gets only negative reviews huh. It's almost funny how much everyone hates this one.
Yeah I'm already used to being the only one who likes it. Makes me feel like a cool rebel. You know, the one who says "no you move" when the world tells you to move and stuff. 
Reminds me of the time long ago when I used to write comments in fanfiction forums to review stories about series I liked. I usually was the only one who actually liked Mary Sue fanfics. 