Read the first 5 chapters, and I LOVE this.
At first I feared that Touko was gonna be like Mei from Citrus (she kinda looks like her), but she's quie the opposite, thankfully. Actually, the two girls' dynamic is the opposite of what you would expect at first − you'd think the tall dark-haired Senpai would be the "dominant" one but it's not that simple. She's on the offensive, sure, but not unhealthily so, and by showing a touching kindness and fragility. And I like the fact that Yuu isn't forcefully denying her own feelings, but that… she simply doesn't have any, at this point, however she would like to. Yet she doesn't reject Touko's feelings either. It creates an asymetric, yet very endearing relationship. The "indirect kiss" scene in chapter 4 is really perfect in that regard.
So far, everything is done right, it is really pleasant to read. The romance is neither unhealthy, nor overdramatized or angsty, yet it's not boring to follow, far from it.
edit: Caught up. Yup, this is good alright. And reading other people's comments is almost as interesting… there's really many different interpretations about Yuu's feelings and behaviour. About Touko, what I get is that she's basically "in love with love" - no matter whether Yuu reciprocates or not, for now she just revels in the sweet, warm and intoxicating sensation of having someone make you float in the air.
In that sense, you could say Yuu is on the same page, except… she can't experience that feeling, yet. But if someone can make her experience it someday, it can probably only be Touko, and that's also why she wants to stay by her side.
…Otherwise, it's unrelated but has Yuu been adopted or something? There's something a little off with her calling her big sis "Rei-chan". Calling their older siblings just by their name isn't something Japanese people usually do… It would be like calling your parents by their name in the West. She even does a verbal backspace to not call her that in Touko's presence. =O Nevertheless, Rei's really a good sis.
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